Blown Away! The intricacy of the relationship were properly described and drew me in. The innocent version, the more mature version, and then the complete adult version added a spell showing the high level of the author. The details described added a sense of attachment and to the two characters and suck in the reader. The drama added also bonds the reader with the characters. It was a wonderful fan fiction and used much innovation, and imagination making the characters your own and adding a different dimension from the manga and the anime. I hope that you will continue to write more stories and I thank you for writing such a wonderful story.

Ending three please

at first i thought the third ending would be the most "interesting" one, so i read that first. but then when i read the first ending, i was much more touched than when i read the third one!

Awwww What a sweet ending.
*dreamy sigh* I just loooove true love!

The Mistress
XOXO

LOVE THE STORY! I LIKE ENDING THREE THE BEST!

that was so HOT! *nosebleed* you are an amazing writer

OMG I loved that it was such a great fan fic lol

OMG I loved it from the very first paragraph lol

Best ever, loved the chapter and it was close to how the series should end or should continue. very good work thank you for your time of writing this

say good by to your ears ritsuka! nice!

Absolutely awesome, especially the last one.

Lol, I think I liked this ending the best! It was sweet and i loved how you did all the different endings. It shows theres more then one end to anything. It was awesome, your score is pefect :)

This really was pretty amazing. :)

I loved all the endings haha.

wow i just wached the whole serise and this story is so perfict!

I liked that quite a lot, especially the consequences one.