This was absolutely brilliant! I really enjoyed this story, it was a very original and interesting plot line. I hope you continue to write Doctor Who fic's!

First, I'm enjoying this fic immensely - you're a great writer.

A bit lacking in Who trivia, though.

"only one true enemy of the Time Lords and that was the Daleks"?

The Great Vampires were the reason that Time Lords were pacifist. The Time Lords killed them all (except for the one that escaped, and the Doctor got that one later). The sheer bloodshed of that war caused the Time Lords to renounce interference and violence.

The Time Lords were far older than the Daleks, and they weren't always so isolated - they had more than one old enemy.

That's a fairly minor quibble, though - great work!

Good punishment for Lai, and love how Ry'kla is home with her family.

Good, glad that time scoop was taken care of and really a bad idea to let the doctor drive...

Oho so very good, I do hope that Dalek is gone for good.

Oh so now we know where Lai is from.

Such a bad idea to upset a time lord, they are so very wise and ancient.

Wow, this gets, better and better!

The doctor should stomp the life out of the Dalek, it's really not worth anything as it is a threat to anyone and everyone not Dalek.

So now the doctor meets his captor, who has bit off more than she can chew for sure.

Hmm, this gets better and better.

Now that is a way for him to deal with his er, captivity...

Well this explains a bit of who captured the doctor.

Wow, an interesting start.

Nicely done. I think this story was about to happen sooner, or later, since the Doctor IS the last Time Lord and all... I'm glad it was done so well. Thank you.