|Reviews for Cast between Worlds
| Pendragon134 chapter 1 . 5/28
Your story would be so much better if you put an hour into military regulation and protocols, and understand that they would not send a cadet... correction a STUDENT into a combat situation. So this is painful to read as well as an incredibly inaccurate portrayal of any of the armed forces, and since you said he was part of the AIRFORCE he would not even be recommended for combat OP, and while yes StarGate portrays an Airforce major on the ground fighting, you also need to understand that is a fantasy world, and they are also in another universe with limited manpower and resources, so in those circumstances, yes I could see it happening, as they would need every available combat personnel to have a gun (also wasn't Shepard only on that mission because he was like one of the Ancients or something, it has been a while since I watched the show so I am forgetting why he was even on the mission in the first place, but it was defiantly not to be on the ground shooting a gun in the first place)
| ROBERT-19588 chapter 1 . 5/12/2019
before Harry left the Wizarding World, I hope you got everything but he hadn't Gringotts, as well as getting Dobby to come with him.
| SeregaKR chapter 12 . 4/22/2019
0 Kelvin is unreachable. The temperature in the space is actually about 10K
| stylo1 chapter 2 . 10/10/2018
seriously learn some physics there is so much wrong with this it would take an epic lecture on even basic things to explain
| teenwriter827 chapter 8 . 9/27/2018
While not bad at all the fact that you have chosen to portray a gay Harry is rather interest ending. Making a clearly non homosexual character be gay is just stupid. Dumbledore was gay. If you wanted a gay character should have used him
| Pyrane chapter 17 . 7/13/2018
Well, that is amazing.
And amazingly depressing that you didn’t update since 2014... Any chance that you will be able to continue it in the future ?
Antway, thanks for this grand story :D
| WhiteElfElder chapter 17 . 6/15/2018
Harry gets more and more responsibility as time goes, and he isn't even trying to look for it. Is the Wizard situation over, or is there more of that to come?
| WhiteElfElder chapter 14 . 6/15/2018
Is the American Magical government going to do anything about the obvious attempted murders? How do they know that none of those on Atlantis are not magical in secret? Is this Voldemort and his ilk, or the stupidity of those like Fudge?
| WhiteElfElder chapter 12 . 6/14/2018
Was it wizards that visited Harry outside of visiting hours?
| WhiteElfElder chapter 9 . 6/14/2018
How did the Genii even get on Atlantis?
| WhiteElfElder chapter 8 . 6/13/2018
Have the expedition not figured out about the healing beds on Atlantis?
| misherukuro chapter 6 . 3/25/2018
Good read thanks for sharing.
| EverRose808 chapter 13 . 3/21/2018
I thought Peter Grodin died in the last chapter?
| Anon chapter 17 . 1/21/2018
Nice story. Hope you update soon! I'd like to see more of harry back on Atlantis with John s.
| mithrilandtj chapter 17 . 12/23/2017
Are you ever going to finish this?