I love it!

Loved it!

Such a great story. Perfect balance between the hunt and S&D relationship.

That was soo good! I'm so glad I discovered such an aamaazing author! :D can't wait to continue reading your stories c:

"He needs you to be his partner." The other man nodded once, like he was pleased with himself.
Caleb...stop playing matchmaker haha. I love that Caleb plays such a huge part in this series and I love the way you write him. :-)
Eris-R-Renee

Your chapters certainly aren't dull. They're always exciting, and awesome!

Another great story! :) Going onto the next one! Xoxo

Please tell me you write professionaly. If not, it's a total waste because your writing is amazing. From plot to flow to dialog and desciption, it's just perfect. I look forward to reading everything you've written

This was much better than the first part. It was freaking awesome! Now I am on to the next part. Thanks so much

I am lost for words... AGAIN... What a plot, what a story and your portrayal of the characters. You simply cannot be human 'cause your writing is absolutely divine! YOU ARE AMAZING

"John's truck rumbled into the lot, gravel spraying under the tires. The Impala followed on its tail, coming to a rest in front of the office. The two cars looked harsh in the soft light, the sharp black shine cutting into the sleepy morning like a blade. They resembled their owners, dominating and powerful, commanding attention from everyone they passed." A brilliant writer you are!

I sped-read everything of yours this week so I'm enamoured with how you write conveying the emotions of even the simpliest object!

Particularly loved the pool bit- sneaky clever Sam! He has Dean wrapped around his little finger. They're just adorable!

The fact that John had no opposition to SamandDean: *sweetness*

Aw! That ending was probable THEE most adorable ending I've ever seen! So freakin cute! This whole story was freakin remarkable! You have an amazing imagination, and you are very VERY talented! ;D

Can you hear me squealing in deligth :D?

If anything this sequel was even better than the first story. I love how you found a way to mix the season one canon into your au!

The relationship betwenn Sam and Dean was perfect. I especially loved the bit where they were playing pool!

The alternating pov worked really well. I think I didn't mention that in my other review. It was well balanced and despite ff. net having apparently deleted all section brakes from this story too (damn them) it wasn't confusing.

Caleb and John were really well portrayed. I wasn't sure at first how they'd fit with this Sam and Dean but it all worked out in terms of the story. All four of them showed character development throughout this fic, which speaks of some really good story telling.

And I was impressed that you managed to make Jim Miller so much more 3-dimensional in this story. Don't take this the wrong way, but he was still a bit of a male Mary Sue in the first one compared to this.

Anyhow, to sum it up:

Great story. Great writing! :)

This is getting so good that I want to read it all in one setting...*yawns sleepily* but it's going to completley deprive me of any sleep if I do that...and I know the first fic to this series did that to me too...LOL. I'm shocked it took me so long to get to the second one..." but I'm reading it now and I really like how you have Dean being kind of stubborn about his relationship with Sam, and yet at the same time showing his caring side...I wanted to smack Sam earlier when he thought that Dean was going to leave him, silly boy hasn't he learned anything? XD I liked the foreshadowing that you did in the beginning of the fic too...it made a lot more sense once you caught up to that point! Caleb watching out for Sam in the way he was and how he guessed that he and Dean had a thing for each other was awesome...I'm hoping that he comes back again, jealous Dean was fun to read! I wonder what Stephen has to say about Sam's past...*muses* I shall have to wait until I can pick this fic up on another night, and the wait will probably drive me crazy as I try to figure out what happens next...

I love what you've done with this. How Sam's powers have appeared, how he's getting more powerful.

I felt so gutted when John said that the demon got away just before it got shot, really gutted, I felt for sure that they'd got him.

Ooh, I'm so glad that John seems to be ok with Sam and Dean being together, I wonder if Dean meant for John to see that or if he just didn't care if he did.

So very very that Caleb survived. Is he confined to a wheel chair forever or is it just temporary while he finished healing?

Really brilliant fic, I so love this whole thing. :)