Wow! D

aww... so much love :D

I really liked this part: “That’s not very nice, Padfoot.” “I wasn’t watching my words.” “You never do.”

That was beautiful.

His mouth ghosted over his lips. DAMN i love that phrase D8 ksldfjskdfj GHOSTED. i also like the word etched a lot.

Oh wow. That was gorgeous.

I'm an EXPERT, hehe, at writing dark, angsty, after-the-war or during-the-war stories. Heh. But this was well written. Definitely. REMUS must stop playing games already, tut tut... :D

Ohh, pretty!

I liked how they both felt so tentative about things. It made everything so hesistantly sweet somehow when it could have been overwhelmingly sad instead.

(-:

not my favorite, but still good. :)

**Duckies

AW! PoA stories are always so messed up but this one wasn't! Excellent work, that was adorable!