Reviews for Kiss of the Fire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Molly's scene was absolutlly awesome. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is bloody brilliant. I love it. |
![]() ![]() I think this was really good writing and it made me wish this actually happened in the books and movies! |
![]() ![]() Well, this made my day! Lovely, dialogue seemed very true to the books (I liked the inadvertent correction of grammar!) |
![]() ![]() Beautifully, potetically written! Loved this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! Thank you so much! |
![]() ![]() That was so cute! I almost started crying because it was so adorable! |
![]() ![]() The ending was beautiful |
![]() ![]() I HAD TO STUFF MY FIST IN MY MOUTH TO STOP MYSELF FROM LAUGHING AND WAKING UP MY PARENTS WHEN MOLLY INTERRUPTED HERMIONE AND RON. Ah yes. This is gold. |
![]() ![]() I really loved it, very creative :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LUVVV IT |
![]() ![]() ![]() very sweet story. Your vocabulary and verb usage was sublime. You can definitely write well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved how you compared their personalities and appearances with fire and water (reminds me of the poem Fire and Ice by Robert Frost... my favorite poem ever!) I love the whole direct quote thing from McGonagall (so like her to do that! McGonagall, I mean) and Mr. and Mrs. Weasley interrupting. Everything was awesome! I decided that I am going to favorite this. ~Caseyandra |