Reviews for Young and Aspiring |
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Lover of Emotions chapter 3 . 8/29/2019 that is good. i hope that you haven't forgotten about this story. update soon if you haven't please. |
Morgen Elisabeth chapter 3 . 6/22/2015 More please. |
meggy999 chapter 3 . 3/27/2014 Love it! Update soon! |
YA Reader chapter 3 . 12/13/2013 This young reader aspires to read the rest of this amazing fanfic...will you help her achieve her noble aspirations? I'll love you forever! |
AquilaPallas129 chapter 3 . 8/10/2013 This is gonna be interesting to read, I don't think that I've read a story were harry is completely emotionless before! I look forward to your next chapter. |
Reader-anonymous-writer chapter 3 . 11/13/2011 ~ I'm just…empty. There's this big, gaping hole in my chest and it's growing and growing and swallowing me whole. ~ He doesn't silence the noise, it's only fair to give them some kind of lead. Interesting game. I don't like antagonistic beginning... And really, walking three hours in the forest isn't an exciting game, at all. It would have been more thrilling if Harry looked for a way to see a ninja as soon as possible without the ninja noticing him. Use silencing and scent-concealing wand-less non-verbal charms, but don't use invisibility. Good luck. |
Niwaki chapter 3 . 5/24/2011 nice I liked this please continue soon |
Sayu Blishtoka chapter 3 . 10/3/2010 This time its been what? 2 1/2 years since an update. wah! |
Cosmos Angel and Yami Darkness chapter 3 . 7/21/2010 keep going please |
Von chapter 3 . 7/13/2010 Very interesting! Fresh new ideas, can't wait to see how it turns out! |
ShadowGuardianX chapter 3 . 6/28/2010 omg. please tell me you arent stopping this story? I love the plot. poor harry. and your writing is amazing. you use wonderful imagery and great description, but you are careful not to overdue it. I cant wait to read how team 7 deals with apathetic god like harry. I mean really, he could probably destroy konoha single handedly in your story. its great. and i really truely hope that you decide to continue and update this amazing story. okay i got a little worshippy there. hehe oops? XD |
Dragonzflyte chapter 3 . 5/26/2010 Harry has turned on the evilness. Do you think he's trying to make the others hate him? Or is it a natural defence mechanism? I like the storyline so far, it really works. The bits and pieces go well together. I am worried about whether you are continuing this or not though. The last update was two years ago after all. I love the story but would hate to get my hopes up only to have them painfully crushed. You may think this is a exaggeration but you would be wrong. It'd be easier to understand if you thought back to story you found- on the cusp of a major plot development- where the author suddenly decides to stop. It truly is crushing. I do, however, understand if life got in your way and whatnot though. I would just be extremely disapointed is all. |
Nobody'sNobody chapter 3 . 2/28/2010 I love how you portrayed Harry, and how their witty conversations are indeed witty. |
BlackRose-FlowerofDeath chapter 3 . 1/4/2010 Very interesting! Can't wait to see what happens next! BlackRose |
tophats-R-us chapter 3 . 11/3/2009 Omfg! And a new fuckin chapter already! |