Glad I got around to reading this. It was a fun little story. Bringing Kikyo up at the wedding & reception made me feel like he was still in love with her, but I think you ended this on the perfect sentence.

Haha, I loved Miroku's response to Inu asking if she'd say yes. Nice chapter.

"she hadn't even in weeks" eaten
"even joy his father" join
One sad chapter after another. As soon as you said he was at the station I kept hoping he'd change his mind because anyone knowing where to show up to stop him would have been too cliché. Nice little flash back

Leaving isn't going to stop people from talking. How did they even find out? I hope Kagome blocks the door & talks sense into him.

"laving her alone" leaving
"tell you earlier. he grimaced" Quotation mark.
I loved how excited Souta was as well as his taste in music.

I have enjoyed your story thus far, but this chapter bothered me. Her apartment has a skeleton key which she gave him after only being friends for a month? One he didn't know was stolen? Then Naraku came in just after she entered her room. Even being exhausted, it's hard to believe she'd be out that quickly & deeply she wouldn't wake to being molested & the ensuing fight. His last comment to her was so selfless & sad.

"off in the family when" family room?
"He acme back from the" came
"passing him hiss shirt" his

I know they normally have their underwear on beneath the hospital gowns, but I thought her awkwardness made it amusing.

"I don't my answer to be" You left out 'want'
Not sure Kikyo made it seem like he keeps running to Kagome every night, but she's going to have her lover try to take out a professional assassin? I see this going well.

This was good, but you need to change 'from' into 'to' & a gender edit in one spot.
"He bit her lip from restrain herself from biting her"

What a bitch! Also, I love that he slipped up & said that.

"you'll want what an ass" - you'll KNOW what
"door of his apartment." -her
"could captive everyone" - capture

Good chapter. I had a feeling she'd be cheating on him.

I was partly hoping she'd run out after him because he forgot his wallet or something & save him. I like it so far, but I would note that you keep saying "costumer' instead of 'customer'

I'll be honest, I'd been hoping the wedding would have have been a dream. Fraternal twins do not look alike. Identical do, though it's rather uncommon for identical twins of different gender. I like it so far.

Faternal is when they look different. Identical is when they look tbe same.

its funny how everyone saw that Kikyo was in it for the money but Inuyasha...poor guy...lol
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