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   LilyLOVESProngs chapter 1 . 6/11/2011 WOW! i really, really enjoyed this. i could imagine the scene vividly! The ending was perfect, well from the time sirius came into remus' bed actually. lines i especially liked. "God, Remus, you're like an ice block!" Sirius exclaimed, snuggling up more to him. "I – I didn't notice." Remus stuttered uncomfortably. - "I see what you mean now," Sirius declared suddenly. "I wish I would know where your eyes are." Remus' head jerked toward Sirius', and his breath caught in his throat. "It's pointless to look for someone's eyes in the dark, Sirius." Remus murmured softly in a logical voice. "It's not pointless to me. It's very pointful." "Pointful, isn't a word, Padfoot." Remus said wearily. "Then I just made it one." Sirius said stubbornly. i loved it! also the kiss was perfect as well! i know ive already said this, but the best thing about ur fic was that u could imagine it vividly. EXCELLENT WORK! xxLilyLOVESProngsxx |
| hpgirl4ever chapter 1 . 5/2/2009 A-W-E-S-O-M-E! D |
| Rock'n'Slash chapter 1 . 9/11/2008 It's not bad, just needs to be longer! _~ I LOVED IT! |
| rica chapter 1 . 3/27/2008 Your story was wonderful! Bravo! I almost wanted Remus to tell Sirius about the Dream. It would have made the whole relationship more intense, but also deeper. Perhaps that's to come, yes? But really, this story was wonderfully sweet and very well developed with the background of them telling each other their worries and such. It was very clear that Remus and Sirius already had a close relationship, they just hadn't been straightforward about how far they wanted to take it. But they are now! YEahS! |
| Technophobic.Shin chapter 1 . 3/1/2008 loved it! |
| the voice of singing clouds chapter 1 . 12/22/2007 no, i don't think it was crappy.. i thought it was cute |
| Cookiepaw chapter 1 . 10/27/2007 That was adorable! It was certainly not crap; it was a very pointful story :D |
| MisbehavingBubbles chapter 1 . 6/29/2007 THAT. WAS. BLOODY. EXCELLENT! LMAO talkative vulture and demented prune... TOTALLY using that on my friends tomorrow. :D “Sirius Black never needs light.” He chuckled. ROFL WIN. :D Great writing. |
| siriuslyblackxx chapter 1 . 6/27/2007 definately not crap! i have decided to add the word pointful to my vocabulary lol |
| XxXpassionatemuseXxX chapter 1 . 6/20/2007 really good. enjoyed it *~*~* Xylia *~*~* |
| Jordanne chapter 1 . 5/30/2007 thats so cute. do you ever run out of ideas/situations to put those two in. you must have the brain power of something really smart! |
| IdOnTwAnTyOuToSeEmEcRy chapter 1 . 5/29/2007 "Sirius Black never needs light." Hahahaha! I LOVED this. Positively lovely. :D :D :D I loved the concept. Great title. :P |
| J.K. LoL-ing chapter 1 . 2/27/2007 It's not crap...it's pretty good. |
| HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 2/3/2007 reminded me a lot of some twisted sleepover fanfic. I should write one like that. Or you should. Or we both should and have a showdown on how many reviews we get. anyway, I LOVED THIS ONE. |
| rekahneko chapter 1 . 1/27/2007 I liked it! The middle filled out the relationship between the two with all their banter. The ending was believable and went along with the rest of the story. It was cute. (-: |
