Reviews for Raven in a Locket
sazunaki chapter 2 . 9/16/2015
Aside from the obvious grammatical errors (like "organ juice" lol) the story is good :)
Me chapter 1 . 7/18/2015
The plot seems good, but, sorry, you're messing a lot around in the different times; half of the sentences are in past tense, the rest in present, etc.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 21 . 8/20/2014
k
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 20 . 8/20/2014
)':
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 19 . 8/20/2014
what will happen?
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 18 . 8/20/2014
nooooo
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 17 . 8/20/2014
something bad is bound to happen.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 16 . 8/20/2014
..
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 15 . 8/20/2014
wow. )':
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 14 . 8/20/2014
let's see why.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 13 . 8/20/2014
this was intense.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 12 . 8/20/2014
my favorite chap so far it was brilliant.
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 11 . 8/20/2014
O_O
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 10 . 8/20/2014
ah itachi you devil you...
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 9 . 8/20/2014
I love how Sasuke is repulsed by itachi.
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