Reviews for Raven in a Locket |
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sazunaki chapter 2 . 9/16/2015 Aside from the obvious grammatical errors (like "organ juice" lol) the story is good :) |
Me chapter 1 . 7/18/2015 The plot seems good, but, sorry, you're messing a lot around in the different times; half of the sentences are in past tense, the rest in present, etc. |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 21 . 8/20/2014 k |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 20 . 8/20/2014 )': |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 19 . 8/20/2014 what will happen? |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 18 . 8/20/2014 nooooo |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 17 . 8/20/2014 something bad is bound to happen. |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 16 . 8/20/2014 .. |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 15 . 8/20/2014 wow. )': |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 14 . 8/20/2014 let's see why. |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 13 . 8/20/2014 this was intense. |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 12 . 8/20/2014 my favorite chap so far it was brilliant. |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 11 . 8/20/2014 O_O |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 10 . 8/20/2014 ah itachi you devil you... |
Insert-somthing-creative-here chapter 9 . 8/20/2014 I love how Sasuke is repulsed by itachi. |