How have I not reviewed this before?

I do love this story - it always brings tears to my eyes.

The pacing is quite well done, too.

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Excellent. I really enjoyed this story. You are truly a terrific writer.

Simply beautiful.

So sad! Beautifully written, very lovely. You conveyed the emotion really well. I almost cried.

I also wish that Sirius and Remus were yours, then this story would be part of the next book. This is good writing, effective use of language. I like how you write the Sirius/Remus relationship, and I like the brisk way you deal with the Tonks problem. This story looks to me like one that has been thought over seriously, not just something that came into the author’s head and was written down in half an hour. Just one point: you say that Sirius’s funds “had been seized along with Sirius”. That implies seized by the Authorities, the Ministry. But if that were so, Sirius could not have bought the Firebolt for Harry. I have always supposed Gringotts kept their customers’ money very securely, and would not let anyone, even the Government, get hold of it. But perhaps that isn’t what you meant. A minor point, anyway. The story as a whole is beautiful – “about two people who love one another very much, and whose love will never die.”

That was an amazing brought tears to my well done.

~Kiss Of Death~