I laughed so hard on this part:
"Keep him under surveillance, i dont like his heart"
Well, i dont like you, but i dont say it out loud...
Good job i loved it

You know this wasn't crappie at all. I find it really cute actually. And I think you could probably make a third chapter so I can read about Tyson's heart attack, you know the one he gets after finding out about his teammates new relationships D also more Kai/Tala is good for our health so you should kip that in mind too.

Well I have to run I hope to see you around in your next story bye.

update

lol. this second chappie is hilarious. _ too bad i don't have room on my favs to save this...T_T

Kyah! I wanted to review your memory problem story too, but the button wouldn't let me! 3 (Loved that story too, just to let you know, but I've never actually read that kind of cliched story...I usually end up sifting through "hey, look, Kai's turned into a chibi, and Tyson has to look after him and they fall in love, yadda yadda yadda...")

Hahah. Anyway. I liked this story. Was funny in all the right places, specially with Bryan's little unspoken replies. And the KaiTal was written really well, so well done. 3

Write more - I shall expect some.

~Dante

Hey hun sorry I haevnt reviewed in ages but my mum got rid of internet at my place and am not allowed online. I am sleeping at her friend's house tonight so that's how I am online at the moment. ANyways this was great! I'm glad you continued it cos I love how this turned out. It honestly is great and I like all the ideas too bad I dont have a printer otherwise I would print it now but I will when I get internet back at my place. Anyways great job on this!

Hehe, cuteness cuteness cuteness! Although I swing more towards Tal/Bry, these pairings are cute and well written Demi .

Really good!

You should pair up all the D-boyz with a bladebreaker, then have a final epilogue that would be cool.

Great anyway!

Dark Kaiser

hehe Bryans funny . good work! I happen to liked that alot :p

There is more! Oh yes maybe I'll get to read some lemoney goodness. XD I'm such a perv anyways this is an awesome ficcy and it's going on my favs. See ya.

I like it! Very good. I am glad that it didn't turn out into an oneshot. But I want to know whether Spencer and Ian got tortured? Please update soon... I need to know what happens next. And I want to know how their relationship will turn out to be? And will the others accept them for who they are aka being yaoi?

-hugs-

Kuro

its so cute

Sweet! hopefully next we get to see how the others react to the couples

Bwahahaha! Darn me to hell! But the fans will be happy *puppy face* Don't blame me...we all wanted it, I just asked first _

So what happened to Spencer? How'd he remain in the Abbey? And if he was there...why the hell didn't he go to Bryan sooner damnit?

. dumb blonde that he is.

And how is he gonna take Kai and Tala screwing like bunnies on speed? And hows Kai gonna take BryBry and Rei?

I'll stop asking questions, I might inspire you more...

*thinks that over*

Um...I'm tied there...so I'll say bye now

CC

Aw! Cuteness! What's Bryan gonna say? :S oo-er...