I really enjoyed reading this one shot, it was beautifully written and everyone was in character. I especially loved the last line, just lovely! :)

This is subtle in its beauty, can't expect anything else from if its written by you.

Oooh, I liked this! This is a cool pairing! I think I like it better than IchigoxRukia...

Nice! Keep up the good work!

Aww so sweeeet.. and beautifully written! :) -nora-

beautifully written and i love this pairing

Wonderfully written

I'm a solid IchiRuki, but I always completely forget in favor of ByaRuki..:P

Lovely work.

adorei!poxa ele podia ter sido mais ousado, a unica ligação que ele tem com a Rukia é por papel, visto que na verdade ela é cunhada dele, portanto ele poderia arriscar, espero que você escreva mais sobre este casal, abraços

I really love your writing style. It's descriptive, but still easy to follow. This was a nice little moment between Byakuya and Rukia too.

I think this story is very sweet and it displays their relationship very well without crossing any borders.

Lovely. Just how I picture them. No one's come closer to my vision of these two. Thanks for sharing.

awwwwww...so sweet..XD...

While I'm not a fan of ByaRuki (I'm sorry, but people all have different beliefs), I am in LOVE with sweet brother-sister moments between the two, and since this didn't exactly have romance in it, I love it.

This story was so beautifully written and delicate, it captured both of their personalities so well and the detail is so descriptive that I can imagine it perfectly. Excellently done.

This was wonderfully written! I thoroughly enjoyed it and would love to see more ByaRuki work from you since you write them so well! 3 But anyway, great work!

*sobs*

its beautiful! absolutely beautiful.

a perfect take on their (possible) complex relationship.

thank you very much for this