Ya pasaron varios años desde la publicación de ese capitulo 10, pero uno nunca pierde la esperanza para poder ver la continuación

Hey there, I'm not sure you still appreciate to get reviews for your story, but here goes.
You did incredibly well so far, it's a very intriguing plot and the characters and background story are wonderful. I'd love to see this story continued and finished, but I guess you have moved on to other projects. Anyway, it still is one of the best fanfics I have read so far, and that's quite a few. Here's hoping against hope you're going to keep on writing more. All the best, Lila

Dang. Good story. So is the Labyrinth going to kill Jareth now? Is Tam going to find his son? Is the creepy thing Wendy talked to the Sarah look alike? Who was the Sarah look alike? Why do I not believe the Labyrinth? Why do I get the sense that the Labyrinth is the baddy here all-around?

Tam walked away from the Labyrinth. It took his child as revenge. Now Jareth wants to walk away from the Labyrinth by giving his heart to Sarah instead. The Labyrinth takes away his heir and Sarah.

Hmmm...if you ever decide to come back to this story, sign me up!

... damn, i'm confused. please, some clarification soon, or i won't be able to read any more...

I really loved the beginning of this, but it's becoming exceedingly confusing. i would love more, so long as things become clearer soon - there is a brilliant plot there, but it's getting progressively harder to see.

and it would be awesome if the romance aspect began to appear more clearly, too

I know you have probably abandon this story but it is wonderful I wish you would return to it, its fun to read what is here anyway

Aw don't leave it there. I'm reading please pretty please with a cherry on top continue writing.

do please continue I have written once a long while ago would very much like to continue reading.

I am still reading this, though time may have seeped by for to long. It is a lovely story wonderfully different and properly dark. Please continue its rare to find a story like this.

Don't worry about clarifying with notes in the next chapter (will there be one?), I think leaving a little mystery is fine and since you've directed us to the ballad, it's cool. Interesting backstory for Jareth. Does Toby being there mean the Labyrinth is going to off Jareth or set him free? Not that anyone should accept that outcome, but it could affect his position with the Labyrinth.

Okay, so it's been a year and change since the last chapter, anything's possible, right?

Fun story.

Yours,

JLP

So few can do Hoggle well. I love your representation of him and his interaction with Jareth. Very continuing of their relationship in the move.

I'm enjoying the direction you're taking this so far. Tam Lin and Jareth being previously mortal. Eagerly awaiting to see the next scene.

So...Sarah resembles the Queen of Fairies...Thom is Tam Lin...and Jareth is their son. Interesting...

Please update! Please, please, please!

I just came across this and am now hooked. I really like stories that go into the connection between the Labyrinth and Jareth. Good work!

Cool! I wish you'd continue it...

Hahaha! You flip coins to write your stories? That is fabulous. _

Ooh, I knew Wendy was lying! I could tell, her words and actions weren't in synch, it was weird. Good job!

And who is this sadistic stranger with her...?