I love it! So cute. Please keep writing.
I think you should give kagome the ability to take on the form she had while unconscious, I think it would be a nice touch.

Hello Lady Ari,
Well, I couldn't wait any longer, *grin* I know I told you I wasn't going to let myself start reading this until I'd finished my new chapters, but I just couldn't resist getting in a sneak peek at the treat that's in store for me. :D
So excited to be reading Inuyasha again...it's been a long time. My overall impression of this introduction: though it's short, I wouldn't make it any longer. It's an extremely effective and gripping start to your story- you've grabbed my interest and made me want to click the next button without delay.

There are a couple of sentence structure and grammatical issues, but they're minor. Will save concrit for later. _

Every good wish,

Aww hurt and make more cyphers. :)

please continue!

Will you be writing more? Its really good.

Lov it...is kagome gonna remember what happened in her head

OMG this is soooo goood! please update soon!

Please put up chapter 5 soon and hurry

please update soon This is really good. Keep up the good work.

I really hope you continue on with your stories they are very good

What will happen next? Does Kagome still have the wings? What did Inuyasha do? How was he really able to communicate with Kagome while she was in her coma? Please post more as soon as possible.

I love this story and ccan't wait to see what happens next so plesa hurry up and update and post the chs.

u have to wright more great job

aw more plzz

i loved this story. inuyasha and kagome are adorable together!