Reviews for Marie's Dragon II: Eldest
DragonLover1551 chapter 28 . 4/27
I’m sad to not be able to learn the colors of the eggs
enejameson612 chapter 28 . 2/11/2015
Great story I see u haven't updated I a while I hope u come back to it I read both of ur Marie stories in one night hope u update soon
FuzziCatz chapter 28 . 8/19/2014
Please write more! I loved both of these stories. I look forward to more.
Md5221 chapter 28 . 2/5/2013
This is awesome such a great story
Eldunar chapter 28 . 9/15/2012
Great story, and once again I deeply regret that a very good fanfiction remains unfinished.
*Sigh* why do all fairy tales end.
srade9779 chapter 28 . 6/17/2012
please update this it is a great story. Please!
CaptainBeer chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
One of my favorite stories :D I'm just sad that you ended it :(
lauritalaloca chapter 28 . 1/1/2012
Please update soon. Don't give up on the story.
KT-LIZ94 chapter 18 . 11/23/2011
loving this story so far.
KT-LIZ94 chapter 6 . 11/23/2011
love this chapter!
iamnotlordvoldemort chapter 13 . 11/12/2011
When I saw the REM sleep line, I almost burst out laughing, a pretty technical term for the dark ages.

Great Story! There are a lot of stories similar to this out there, but few of them ever get past the tenth chapter.
Mim chapter 28 . 11/12/2011
Hi I'm Mim, I read thisand the prequel in one day, I know that you havn't updated in years but I really enjoy this story lne. I would love it if you continued it. Also, my younger sister asked nme what I wasnreading an when I told her she asked me if I

could post here and suggest a name for one of Saphiras eggs (the free one) she asked

That I suggest the name Elasiea pronounced Eh-lass-e. Sorry that she mad me put that in but she thought that it was a pretty nae. Again, great ststory, you're a great writer.
Oruzhiye chapter 28 . 7/13/2011
FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS GOOD IN THIS WORLD YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS STORY!

I'm sorry for that crazy momment, it's just that this story is in simpler words just plain amazing! Like I mean seriosly, there is soo much content that I just can't begin to describe the greatness of it!

Please I beg of you! You must continue this!
yue moon chapter 28 . 3/22/2011
so is murtagh going to end up captering her and them stating a crush
Taylor chapter 28 . 12/28/2010
Over my Chrismas break I have been reading your stories and they are absolutely amazing!I enjoy your stoy more than the actual book and I like how you are able to take on the different charector roles. They act the same as they would in the book, which is a really difficult thing to do. A lot of the other stories do not do the charectors any justice. I also like how you portray the dragons. You make them believable. I like how they have their own personalities, but they still act very regal and dragony. I mean that they are powerful, they guide the riders, always have answers and opinions and are respectful, but they still ahve a certain innocence. I think you do all this perfectly. I hated Triana in the books so I like how she became an enemy in this story, I REALLY hate her and I want Oropher to squash her like a and Marie make the perfect couple, even if in the beginning he was a dirty two-timer and kept switching back and forth to Arya. But I can see how the charectors mature as they go through the story and I like where they are now. I don't know if I could take another separation between Oropher and Marie, the last one made me cry. You are very good at creating emotion in your work! Oh, and I like how you came up with Swiftblade! In your faces you sexist dwarves! TAKE THAT! Again, I really hate Triana. But I'm really excited to see what happens with the fairth!I really really want Eragon and Marie to have a happy ending!Your writing is amazing! PLEASE hurry with the next chapter! oh and I apoligize for any bad spelling and grammar. I am terrible at both of those. (_)
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