hahhaahha. hilarious

Oh, bad luck. Well written.

Oh the poor beastie - foiled! I wonder if Harry might not have been a teeny bit more sympathetic, but I suppose they were planning to bite him on the paw.

Right, I might seem like a bit of a stalker... I'm not, really. Just read the other story you just posted, and thought I'd look at your other stuff as well.

Brilliant idea about the critic, planner and dreamer. When you think about it, those three should have a very good chance of success together. Too bad Harry got in the way.

Great writing!

Wonderful! To bad for the beast, having a parseltongue around. I enjoy seeing such a common scene as the care of magical creature from the creature's point of view. Original and well written, as all your stories.

Haha. Harry always wins :)

Convenient, sometimes, this parseltongue

Brilliant! I loved it, thank goodness that Harry speaks the language of snakes. I especially liked the way that you described the three heads of the snake creature.

Strange indeed. Deliciously creepy, in fact. I loved that brief glimspe of Harry's more serpentine side! (Generally Dark!Harry manifests himself by listening to Evanescence and buying a gothly wardrobe.)

That was a little strange.

Regards,

Ari