... Wow. What a deep, philosophical story. It really made me think about life, the universe and all that stuffs...

Just... Wow...

My level 3.5 billion super-clones own your Sues. And the world.

Cookieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeéèëeeeęeeeēeeeeëeeeeeeeèê eeeeeëeeeeeeeeeeeeêeeeeeeeee eëeeêeeeeeeeę!¡!¡!¡!¡!¡!¡!¡!¡!¡

I walk in, order my army of clones to annihilate her and they take over HE WORLD!

boy it's going to be hard to forget the side of gary oak's sobbing! that girl is going on a killing spree with her perfectioness!

I do hope that she does die, but I know that she'll survive...sadly.

But I do have a question: Didn't George belong to the unnamed kid in the first Gym that Vanatessa went to, and can't you not catch other people's Pokemon?

Keep up the good work!

you are awesome. lol i only read the first chapter, and it's awesome. keep it up XD

Oh...dear God. I must now slam my head into the keyboard because I said "aw" when the Mary Sue died. Not like a normal person, like "Aw, that's a stupid ending" but "Aw, how cute!". I will never be able to explain WHY that ending was cute, but it was. -shakes head at self-

Anywho, it was fun to read, and the first Mary Sue parody I've read that has ever come to a close. It was fun, had a cute little plot, and I really enjoyed it.

And, just because you mentioned it seven or eight times, who DOESN'T love yaoi (well written yaoi, at least)?

I enjoyed this parody very much! Was laughing a lot at the classic stuff, like the complicated Mary Sue names, the changing nicknames, and the thoughtless plot holes. The snarky side comments within the story just made things better.

I'm not much into killing characters for endings, but this... It's priceless! It really suited the story.

Good job!

Song-fics aren't allowed?

O.o

When did that happen? Also, still funny. Onto chapter three.

*Giggles* Funny. I always enjoy fics where the author intentionally writes the character as a Mary Sue.

Hey, nice chapter! I always love reading a good parody. (By the by, Swampert owns Blaziken every time.) And, without further ado...

Dragon for a thousand generations!

oh thank GOD it's over - lol - :D - hope your happy, I now get exceedingly paranoid whenever I use any of the stupid cliches mentioned in the previous chapters.

That said, LOVE YA! lol - thank god I'm not the only one who's sick of all those Ash(Ass) Ketchum wannabe trainers. Thanks for reminding me why most Original Trainer fics suck! ;P

Super funny - you rule!

Nice! Awesome parody; I loved it.

Aw, poor Vulpix...doomed to be the Sue's slave for now on...

Lovely story . So true about the Sues. I hope Vanatessa dies tragically in the end...that would be excellen-er, so, so sad.