Aww! Few grammar mistakes, the spacing is a bit odd and the bold text is confusing, but really cute.

cool and sexy.

(crys) its so (crys harder) beautiful!

Lady...(cry) Kagome

(walks up to friend and crys...)

"Read it it makes you cry!" She says to her friend who starts to cry.

Aw... that's so tender! I especially loved the poem... However, I do think Sango deserves another... but this is ok too, since I think Kagome doesn't deserve Inuyasha... IN THE LEAST. Incredible!

God bless ya soul,

EW! what is wrong with you? this is wrong on so many levals! now, i'm all 4 gay pride but, sango and kagome? you are a disgusting person who has scared mr forever!

This was very sweet! Other than some grammar things I loved it.

Thanks for the reviews! :D

Would you mind if I added you to my C2?

i like the story. i think it was cute hope to see more of your work.

see ya

AW, this was so cute! I loved the poem! Very very sweet fic. MORE OF THESE! Thank you very much for writing this.

See you,

Mireille 29

Brought a tear to MY eyes. And I have no idea who these characters are. Beauty of it is - it doesn't matter. Some things never change.

Could have done without the poetry formatting, tho.

Looks like this was done a while ago... any more?

I liked it. :) So sweet and cute. Just a little short... Please write more, will'ya?

your story id gettin interesting so write more please

Great story! Write more soon!

this could use a bit of work because of the grammatical errors, but that's not what's important. the underlying emotion of love and a desire to have that returned is the most important. my suggestion is to use more description and find a beta. this has room for potential and if you ever need a beta, i offer my hand, alright. anyhow, thank you reviewing my A Love Like No Other Poetry Series. By the way, the poem was gorgeous.

Sincerely,

Yo

That was beutiful

My poem\story is a little more saddening but not a yuri.

I love this. Do you know how hard it is to find Sango/Kagome fics? Thanks!