Tear jerker!

Oh, how I loved this. Amazing job!

Hits home on how I would have felt if I was with the gang. I too, would have fell deeply and completely in the with Johnny Cade.

Stay Gold, baby.

-AceCade

beautifully written but so sad...it made me cry. then again i've been crying all day since we finished the Outsiders in class today lol, it's not right Johnny or Dally dying though

it was good, until thry died ): (sniff)

Wow, there have been a lot more Johnny fics springing up lately... how lovely! This is such a great fic, even though it was a one-shot you included so much without rushing everything, because we all knew the story. Poor Nell. Poor Johnny. Great fic. :)

Omg, that was so good it hurts. It made me cry... *tears* so sad. But very good. You got quite a way with writting. She wasnt a mary sue ;) good job!

Ooh Strawberries! Oi, I love it, I love it! It's exactly how I feel about Johnny...except I can't do anything about it! Well, anywho, this is really really good for a first fic...well, it's really good for a fan fic in general...anyways, I hope I can see more from you in the near future!

IT WAS VERY GOOD I WISH IT MORE CHAPTERS OR SOMETHING MORE BECUASE I HATE IT IN THE BOOK WHEN JOHNNY AND DALLY DIED AND EVERY THING FELL TO PIECES. THE STORY IS REALLY GOOD AND I LIKE THE IDEA OF A GIRLIN THE GANG. THANKS FOR WRITING IT AND AGAIN IT WAS REALLY GOOD.

Hmm. Interesting, in a good way. I think that you did a good job of integrating Nell into the story. I'd never thought of doing something like that.

I *did* think it was funny that you said it didn't turn out the way you wanted it to, but "what can you do." :) I know exactly what you mean. You'd think that the author has control of the story, but that's really not the case. Sometimes, it seems like no matter what you do, a character is just determined to behave differently than you had intended!

Thanks for entertaining me!