I am enjoying the two chapters. Please continue to update. Thanks so much. I really enjoy the Firebird series.

Oh, sweet, you decided to continue it! Will you go through the trilogy, and give Rami a chance to learn that there's another rule and another religion out there, that's exactly what she's been missing? That could be really cool.

I love the Firebird Trilogy-they are my favorite books of all time.

This is pretty good, I hope you continue the story.

Thoughtful and interesting. I was so excited when I saw that somebody had written Firebird fanfiction! I absolutely *adore* that trilogy, and I was nearly jumping up and down when I finally managed to purchase a copy for myself.

...which really has nothing to do with your story. But I liked it ever so much! I'm off to read your other stuff-maybe I'll think of writing a Firebird fanfic myself? Hm...

I'm so bad at this kind of thing, creating an original character within the book setting, but you're really good at it. I love her speculation on whether she was assigned to her position as a deliberate punishment. The Netaian system with the servitors and wastlings and everything is one of those kind of things that always makes me angry, even though I know it's just in the books. Apart from the story, I like your reviewing rules. . .maybe I should put up some of my own. Somehow I've never gotten around to it. Anyway, great story (great 3 stories) and write more sometime!