Reviews for Finding the Spirit
wolf of infinity chapter 14 . 8/9/2015
Ooh, I found this again! I remember reading this many years ago, but forgot to favourite it I believe. I enjoyed reading it back then, just as I enjoyed reading it now! :) It's a very nice fic, with some sweet romance, fluff and drama. They are both out of character, but then, that doesn't really matter, because it fits the story. :) I'm glad I found it again!
hineninja chapter 14 . 10/19/2012
Wow, I didn't expect this fic to be so awesome. I don't care that Tifa was way out of character. I love your voice-and you even managed an original character that isn't annoying! So rare in the world of fanfic. Wonderful job. And I love your Marlene. I love your everything. Christmas in Wutai.

This line in particular killed me:

"Just spit it out, damnit!" she cried.
Cloud laughed.
"I don't think he did."

You gave me an enjoyable evening, reading this, finally relaxing after a hellish week. Thank you!

You did mix up your tenses a little though in certain parts.

But anyway. WRITE FOREVER
NothingSoSpecial chapter 4 . 7/22/2012
Having a great time reading! Thank you for such a wonderful story to keep me happy before bedtime!
-NothingSoSpecial
Riosis chapter 10 . 6/16/2012
I'm utterly confused. I was so happy to see a valenwind story with good writing, but I'm afraid that was all but ruined In this chapter. All of a sudden you switched from third person to second, and consecutively messed up the context of the entire chapter. I recommend that you fix
GrandMasterEm chapter 14 . 4/10/2012
This story made me laugh sooooo hard. Especially the end when Shera turned the music waaaaay up :)

These two are my favorite because they're so opposite and I loved how you pointed that out so often. I also liked how their additudes rubbed off on each other. Your writing literally kept me begging for more. I kept telling myself I would stop and get something done when the chapter was over and before long I had finishec the story in one sitting. The character portrayal was very good. I especially loved how Barret was all embarrassed when hearing about Cid and Vin's sexy escapades. ;) All together, great story! Keep up the good work!

Oh and I really enjoy the way you made Vincent such a flirt... and he calls Cid dirty? xD haha
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
lol, I read the reviews you have for this story, and a lot of them are funny, especially that RichestNecrowhatzit guy's. I agree with Poisonandsugar, though. A sequel with Cloud with someone would be really funny, especially with the way you made Cloud in this fic. Much less of a spaz than in the other one, with Seph. Well, anyway, I hope you got as big of a kick out of the outrageous reviews from that A-hole as I did, and I hope you think on the new idea we gave?

~RELionhart
PoisonAndSugar chapter 14 . 11/3/2011
Please make a sequel focusinf ion cloud's closet relationship~!

:3
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 13 . 10/25/2011
You know, I have read this story quite a few times (and loved it by the way) but I just now noticed that you act quite a bit like Zack would to how people were flaming that one person (cant be bothered to try to remember how to spell the name). Thought you just came off a bit like how he would. The cheerful peacemaker after having some fun at the other's expense (just a little fun mind you lol).

Just thought it was interesting, is all.

Great story. :D
BLub271 chapter 14 . 12/1/2010
Fuckin love this story! :)
DeliciousDarkAngel chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that I truly enjoyed your fic. It is one of my all time favorites. I'm a rather picky fanfic reader and your story is one of the best. It is very heart warming and an excellent read. I truly love all your work. Keep writing. Maybe pop out another CidxVincent fic sometime soon.
winterspiritto.deviantart.com chapter 14 . 1/5/2010
Beautiful, just beautiful! I love CidXVin-pairing very much, but never have I met some story having Vincent so dirty! Very pleasant surprise indeed.

The writing followed very much after Cid's and Vincent's nature and logical thinking, or at least until they changed. Cloud was as dump as always...

I also like how long you made the timegap be between the real story and this one, so it didn't really make me think anything unlogical about the plot. Even thou Yuffie seemed as childish as she always was, but who could change her?

I really enjoyed this one, all this teasing, nuggling and stuff. Thank you!
azizet chapter 12 . 9/23/2009
God I love this story. This is like the 6th time Ive read it. It never gets old!
Fetherhd chapter 14 . 8/31/2009
hahahah loved this. Very well done
Fetherhd chapter 3 . 8/31/2009
Oh I love it. Imagine telling Chaos to suck it up.
Me chapter 14 . 2/2/2009
Oh yeah.

Can you write more fics? Cause I'm really running out of life force.
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