THX

That was really awesome ...

In general, my mother doesn't like me talking about stories I've read, but she actually smiled and said that is sounded sweet when I told her about Minerva's present for Fawkes and the picture ...

I also liked the Ro/Sev parts ...

And the song was just so ... well, let's just say that I remembered a certain scene from a certain movie with the song ... *lmao*

That was awesome! I loved it and thought that it was romantic!

Brilliant. I love this story. Dumbldore/McGonagall just makes sense to me and I'm a total Snape/Hooch shipper so that just makes it perfect. My only slight criticism would be that you do need a beta to tighten up your spellings.

Well well well, what have we here? A revision? It's good, especially the part when Rolanda catches Severus smiling, I especially like how you mentioned his secret crush and how it got started. Yeah, I'm a Sev/Ro junkie through and through.

Chael

I really love it. it was so funny but sad as well at some time. I liked the outcoming of the whole story.

i love this story. *tear* Please but up another one soon I love your stories! Get craxking! LOL!

Litasha

Hey, mistakes but still wicked,real cheerd me I cant isnt never is.

Really cool, story-loving the Harry/Ginny! sweet! Two thumbs up!

And Olivia,if youre reading this,I'm sorry,but so should you be.

:)

Very cute. Good job.

Now that you're done, maybe go back over it, using the Export/Backup thing, and fix some grammar and punctuation mistakes. They're not big tho, so its all good. :)

Cute Story! I can totally see Albus make such an effort for his Tabby. :)

Hugs,

Kayjay

Ok,

#1; wonderful ending! *claps*

#2; wait! It's ending? *sob*

#3; I thought *I* was the typo queen! lol...I've changed my mind; you are the new typo queen...

One example; "renew our vowels of love" don't you mean vows? and there are a ton more! and do you realized that 'I' when you are talking about yourself as in 'i wonder who could have put that mistletoe above us?', That I was supposed to be capitalized and there were a ton of those. It a bit hard to focus on the story when there are so many spelling and punctuation errors.

#4; otherwise; I thought this was a wonderful story and I'm sad to see it end!

#5; Post a new story! Post a new one now!

All my love and waiting for more,

~Lily~

I really liked this story. I was feeling really moved until you started referring to the wedding vows as vowels... That kind of killed the mood for me. Oh well, all in all a great fic! -bigkihap.

aw glad minerva had a wonderful birthday

wonders what song Albus requested for them to play

Not sure where you're going with this... but I'll stick with you. I noticed you had many sentences that didn't make a whole lot of sense. Maybe try getting a beta? Stick with this sroty, keep going, and good job. :)