Reviews for The Potter Legacy: The Story of Lily and James |
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Guest chapter 2 . 7/15 Physical Strength doesn't matter in the wizarding it did , both Harry and Snape would be terrible wizards as they are very skinny. |
ClairePotter19 chapter 61 . 5/21/2018 I loved this story, I'm so sad it had to end the cannon way though. I really felt like was a part of the story, I laughed and cried, waited for my time to reset on the library computer so I could read and now I'm so sad it's over. My favorite part was when Petunia found Harry. I thought you portrayed it perfectly. After reading the books I knew Petunia ever really stopped caring about her sister. I thought that it really helped show some light on a character, I personally disliked through the story. I just thought of Snape, he truly was a misunderstood character, I still don't forgive his cruelty towards certain students/houses, but it helps to show one of the messages I really took away from the books. Nothing is ever as it seems You probably have a life now and probably won't read this but remember this, nothing is ever truly forgotten. ~Claire P. |
lily peterson chapter 1 . 4/8/2018 it was awesomer then anything i have ever read |
Lilypotter chapter 10 . 10/3/2017 I don't think that people should start getting angry with a grieving person after only a MONTH. It takes a long time for people to adjust and to fill the hole in their hearts. Is your family more important than your junior cert? Yes. Do you get a month to study for your junior cert? No. You get three years. It's a huge thing for someone to leave your life so suddenly and I feel like it is rather being brushed aside in this chapter. |
deetya11 chapter 58 . 6/1/2017 This chapter had me uncontrollably crying for a bit! You did really well writing it. |
LanieHallows chapter 61 . 10/15/2016 I love this story so much! I started with this story seeing that the story before this was never finished, I was confused at first but quickly caught on. I've just loved this story so much, you portray each character perfectly and... I just love it. The last few chapters made me cry, I hardly ever cry while reading stories, so that's saying something. This has to be one of my favorite Jily stories ever. Thanks for writing it! ~~~Lanie~~~ |
Guest chapter 43 . 7/8/2015 Please try and get the words right, stroller isnt a word in Britain, pushchair is |
Guest chapter 29 . 7/7/2015 You had to talk about daughters, you made me sad thinking about Harry's unborn sister |
Guest chapter 28 . 7/7/2015 Trelawney started teaching two years before Snape |
Guest chapter 25 . 7/7/2015 A purse isnt a bag, a purse is a wallet that girls have |
Emilyrose48 chapter 1 . 2/23/2015 Good story but why is there a sequel if you haven't even finished the first book? |
Redhead Stargazer chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 Just gotta say this is my favourite fanfic of all time! I know people rave about the Life and Times but this is better in my opinion. It has made me laugh and cry and that is the mark of a great author. Keep it up! X |
DracoSly chapter 61 . 10/7/2013 I think this was the most heartbreaking story I've read on here. You did an amazing job with it! |
Guest chapter 46 . 9/2/2013 Just FYI its StupEfy. |
JMoonrise chapter 41 . 8/15/2013 Neville was actually born the day before making Harry the more likely candidate as well. |