This is SO fav - why don't you continue?

Very nice.

I love stories that challenge conventions and this does so nicely.

Actually, it's more in tune with some of the original faerie tales.

While taken to an extreme, this story nicely demonstrates that one sisters happy ending meant the end of certain happy dreams for others.

You missed the whole point. This is a story about guilt. Cinderella has forgiven her family because bitterness wouldn't allow her to live 'happily ever after.' They know they don't deserve it. Their own guilt over that undeserved forgiveness destroys them more thoroughly than any deliberate revenge.

Love your enemies - they really hate that.

Good story. While I don't entirely understand it, I did notice the insinuation, though I'm fairly certain it was more than that, that this Cinderella (that is what this story is, isn't it?) isn't necessarily a "good little girl" like in the Disney version. Again, good story.

Bravo. One of the best stories I've read here. Beautifully plotted and played out. I hope this shows up in print someday.

very wery good, i never thought of it that way. Please write more.

good story! i like how you portrayed the princesses confusion about hate and living happily ever after -giggling- it was humerous. very nice work. i hope that there is more...?

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