I'm actually surprised Blu didn't utilize an argument centering around the fact that she has one wing, making her an easy target for predators. That might've added more conflict to the dialogue but nonetheless it is still intense and enjoyable. I cannot wait to read more.

Although Jewel has a disability, she wants to be free in the jungle and I identify with her because I also have a disability and I want to do things that others don't dare to do.

I hope Jewel can convince Blu to get out of the aviary.

Atte: Jaqui

Gals they’re getting along nicely

Well looks like our lovebirds have something in common

Very well done chapter. Some light spelling mistakes here and there but overall very well written. The flashback scene was well thought out and the analytical portion in the beginning was my favorite part of the chapter. Dream chapters can be great if they're done correctly and I must say this one flows well like a river. Also I've never really seen authors having Jewel consider the possibility that Blu didn't have a choice in becoming a pet. Another detail I liked.

Jewel's past was sad and it is very common that in all RIO stories we write the past of Blu and Jewel

I love your story friend don't stop writing

Atte: Jaqui

awww ... how cute. Her story reminded me of the first time my Erickcito agreed to be with me after confessing to my disability and illness.

don't stop writing friend. I already identified with Jewel

Atte: Jaqui

Glad Blu managed to brighten up her day

Another new face. Wow how many new faces are there since I was last on this site. Welcome to fanfictikn

Honestly this is probably one of your defining chapters thus far. While there are still minor mistakes in dialogue, you certainly improved. You added extra details such as how characters react to dialogue.

Though the detail I found very intriguing was Tulio's reaction to Blu writing. I could be wrong but this is the first Rio story I've read that incorporates Tulio becoming all amped up when Blu starts writing. That was a well placed piece of comedy, such as a great use of a very small piece of detail from the movie.

I cannot wait for the next chapter. Start working at it!

Well this is sorta the first time I've seen a Rio story try breaking the environment with Blu telling humans that they were sentient and smart. Although it is quite possible for IRL birds to be this smart as well as sentient. We just haven't been able to analyze their languages yet.

Well at least Blu and Jewel are bonding

So by now you have a story where Jewel dies and now she has lost her wing. Poor thing :/

It reads great, great work and keep up the good work!

So this is good. The level of detail has improved quite a bit and the flow of the chapter was well warranted. And good for you for planning it all out.

I'd say just work on the dialogue a little more. You skipped some spaces when Blu said three dialogue entries when you can condensed them into a single paragraph, while adding more details, especially with how he feels. Other than that, everything else is squared away.