As a soldier and stone cold asshole, I can say quite honestly that crying over the death of an animal only makes you human. And is more manly than most other things. Being stoic doesn't make you manly. Being a man means protecting that which/whom you love, even unto your dying breath, taking care of your family, and honoring your oaths. Outside of that, little else matters. Following this story.

try using time skips with a few flashbacks thrown in so that you don't have to write out everything that happens each school year

I hope you finish it. I’m sure you couple find some people to help you write the story

Well I, for one, hope you keep going. However, with this chapter you've completely crossed into a Rating beyond 'R'. If you're not careful, FFN admins are going to delete it and give you a warning.

All that said, I hope you continue it, even if you have to move it to a site like AO3 (which allow that sort of material). In my own stories I've written them so that they knock on the door of 'X', but don't actually cross into that Rating; instead, I leave that to the imaginations of my readership.

Sinyk

Fun though at this point it'd be a polyamorous relationship not a polygamous relationship

I do hope that you continue this fic, even if you take your time with it.

just finished reading this all and I truly hope you continue. I'm happy to criticise you if you like, but I don't think that's what you need. you have other reviewers doing that.

What I will say is that the political angles Harry is working make wonderful sense. Giving Harry and eidedic memory makes a lot of sense. I hope you have harry use his (apparently) inherited metamorphmagus powers.

I completely understand being burned out, so if you want to chat about it feel free to PM me. I'm also happy to review chapters of you ask me before sending them!

have a great day!

also remembered that nagini was turned into horcrux only in 4th year when riddle murdered bertha Jenkins (or was it jorkins?)

okay i might have been a bit harsh on you about the fleamont thing. turns out that there was infact a fleamont family. harry's great grandmother was the last fleamont. its a pureblood family but in no way noble. but in a fanfic, that should be enough so keep with it if you want. sorry for that. buuut the locket point still stands. fix it in a conversation later(if you can.) harry does have access to grimmauld house you know?

wow you really know very little about the harry potter universe huh? or maybe its been a long time since you reread or rewatched? hell even the many many many fanfics would have helped you. I mean for one, Fleamont is not a family name. its harry's grandfather's first name like fleamont potter. and a noble house like the potters would never name one of their own after another family's name. the second problem was the locket. Slytherin's bloody locket was in Grimmauld House. the toad only got it after mundungus fletcher stole it in order of the phoenix. So how pray tell would dolores umbridge have the locket at this point in time. even if its an au, there is absolutely no fucking way she would have it right now. and if she did, there is no way that voldy wouldn't have already possesed her. they only got the locket from her the first time without it possessing her because it hadn't been too long since she bought it.
ok done with my rant. thanks for the chap, hope you update soon and try to fix this without deleting everything.

Your narrator meant "spells cast by the Elder Wand" since the English verb "cast" is one of those in English that stays the same in all tenses. "Cost" and "thrust" are like that too.
Harry would have said "girls' dormitories".
Well done, Death! at grabbing those two versions of Tom Riddle junior. I hope she washes her hands properly afterwards, though! EW! Or she would have Tom riddlejunior cooties on them for far longer than necessary.
Your narrator meant to say that Pandora "gained a lot of fame".
Your narrator meant "access to its wards", not "access to it's wards"and "follow its movements", not "follow it's movements".
I agree a 100% with Sirius' idea of having Gilderoy Lockhart tortured for a very long time in Azkanban by the dementors.
Padma Patil would have said "way more open to sex than most others".

love it.
great update.
I can't wait what happens next.

You could always try to continue trying to finish this story, and if u can't then I'm more than willing to take over and continue from there. If that would be the case, then all I ask for is to provide me with that ideas and plans u had in mind for the story so I can try to keep it the way u wanted. I myself have many great ideas for the story :3

Ngl, I'd go for Lady Death as well.

Plz finish this fix it’s good