Reviews for Mass Effect: The Lost Colony |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cringe |
![]() ![]() well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Huh, different take on the Cybrex I see |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interessting Story! Please continue to writing. |
![]() ![]() It could be better. |
![]() ![]() Synthetic? Warp Drive? Psionic Theory? |
![]() ![]() well nice idea but i don't think you have given the draco gyes enough time to build up enough before the reapers show up ... unless you want to bring the draco fleet to the milky way for some unexplainable reason ... after all why would you send your entire fleet to another galaxy without beeing able to call them back ... |
![]() ![]() Good chapter. Minor flaw I would like to point out is the Mass Effect verse, the mech fighting the Turians should be a YMIR, not a LOKI. Loki mechs were basically robotic red-shirt cannon fodder, and the YMIR is more of a heavy weapons assault mech/mobile platform. |
![]() ![]() wow |
![]() ![]() ![]() great so far i hope to see more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you! Mr. Guest for reminding of chapter 3. Forgot to change the name of mech XD. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn Excellent chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is getting better by the chapter! I wonder how the Alliance and the other nations will react when the Galactic Federation reveals/shares their origin story?! |
![]() ![]() whoa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting |