Predictable, but not unwelcome.

SHILI IS NOT A DESERT

I thought Shili was a jungle/Savanna planet with colorful plants and reddish grass. You keep describing a desert which makes no sense location wise for a capital city.

Wonderful story and loved the epilogue. In regards to TCW I was expecting where it went but the conclusion of Ahsoka and Rex's story was exciting and heartbreaking. The way Ahsoka looked at the graves was brutal. I also was not expecting the Vader to appear at the end, he almost seemed sad at the idea she was gone.

YAAAAY! This was such a great story! I love happy endings, and I never could make Obi-Wan or Anakin do what they did...Which is good, because I'm a fanfic writer, right? SO that's legal! Good job! Oh, your story made me cry. :)

This ending was so sweet!

This is a magnificent story, Ahsoka's remark to Anakin that she was aware of Anakin and Padme were together in some form lifted a weight off his shoulders as by Revenge of the Sith, he had someone to talk to about his worries. If my instincts are correct, did Anakin kill Sidious after the former told him that Obi-Wan had made contact with Grievous? Anyway, congratulations on your efforts on this story.
If only it occurred in Canon.

That ending hurt SO MUCH, but reading this helped. This was a really nice, sweet epilogue and it made me feel better :)

Great ending to a great story, on a difficult day when we really needed it.

Yay! So glad everything ended out ok. great Story!

This is one of my favorite stories I have read! I love it!

Excellently done! The ending was just perfect-I couldn't stop the victory music from A New Hope from playing in my head.
I honestly don't have any criticism for you. This story was awesome, I want it to be canon!
Until next time. May the Force be with you :)

Can you do a chapter 11

I've really like your story, a little short but a very good story. Go on, this is a good beginning

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