Really liking this story so far and I so hope the author will continue with it. Would be good to see how Shirou, Rin and Saber will turn out in this universe!

Really loved this chapter and i hope you continue with it and see how everything will turn out.

My feeling about Avalon and muzans blood:

I feel like avalon should be able to remove muzans blood from shirou now that he have live with that weapons almost all his life and that Muzans blood is like a poison, but only work for shirou with fully heal him becasue else it would be too broken in the story. But that just how i feel tho and its your story so you choose what you want to do with it and good luck with making it.

interesting, although i suppose it is kind of stupid to tell muzan about avalon and things. staying silent is better you know.

beat muzan out of it.

Wow this story was awesome, the two chapters were dense but still good. Would be better if they were spread out to more chapters at slower gait. I hope to see it’s continuity soon, I am also guessing the frailty of Shirou was necessary for the plot, else was hard to see him went down in his fight undoubtedly.

Ack! The infamous cliffhanger got me!

Hehe.

Thank you so much for letting us read this wonderful life of these 3.

Oh my god, the info dump. I still read it, but I skipped through some of it.

The power scaling feels a bit off. Shouldn’t Shirou be able to beat Muzan with a couple of slaps? I can’t see how Shirou would just fall unconscious when his “loved” one is hurt.

Isn’t Rin stronger then this?

Nice.
Keep it up.

Have a taste of 15 Percent Attack Up, 50 percent Buster Up and NP5 Excaliblast.

Nice chapter you should update more frequently

Can't wait for the next chapter, this story is good.

Just a tips for your writing. In first chapter that wss supposed to be prologue, please make it short as to not make the readers bored, especially if it was a crossover story of MC being transported to otherworld. I'm sure readers will be impatient for the story to get forward in the crossover world.

Btw look forward to Shirou in Azur lane crossover. I'm quite an avid gamer of azur lane since I really like collecting those cute (and often lewd) girls. It's already fate for Shirou as eroge protagonist to be surrounded and troubled by those girls.

If it's possible, it will be more appropriate if Shirou in azur lane crossover is Shirou from Fate route (Arturia route). With Shirou's passion to search for Arturia eventually land him in front of a loli Queen of England Elizabeth (aka Lolizabeth) thanks for a certain meddling troll vampire, it will be utterly hillarious.

It would be really funny if shirou, rin and saber would do to muzan. Like how kiara did to zepar. Bully him into submission.

moreeeeeeeeee

A very interesting chapter, but shirou must have used his anti immortal weapons.
For your fate x azur lane story:
vanguard: helena or sheffield
main fleet: essex, north carolina or formidable