Reviews for To the Victor Go the Spoils |
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I know okay chapter 2 . 3/30 I wouldn't have wanted to work under someone like that either. I hope everything works out for them. |
I know okay chapter 1 . 3/30 I'm not surprised he'd forget his birthday when he never really had one growing up and was just too busy. |
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 2 . 2/29 Cute |
Hemlockconium chapter 2 . 12/30/2019 I feel so bad for Draco, but he deserves better and it’s so good to see him going after it. You depicted Draco and Narcissa’s relationship beautiful even in such a short scene. I love the name you chose for Blaise’s mother; it’s very fitting in more ways than one. “He knew those footsteps like he knew his own heartbeat.” is such a beautiful line. I can only imagine how the conversation went down when Harry showed Draco the Marauders’ Map and told him what he’d used it for! |
Hemlockconium chapter 1 . 12/30/2019 Another brilliantly written story! I love how well Draco knows Harry that he fibbed about when the reservation was for, and I never realised how funny a drunk Harry would be! |
thereviewer chapter 3 . 12/22/2019 I surprisingly liked this, "surprisingly" meaning that I've never cared for Harry/Draco fics. It reads smoothly with no SPaG mistakes (which for me is the most vital part of engaging in a story) and I like your writing style. Only quibble is that I would suggest a reduction of the swearing, which is a little off putting. That being said, if you're doing one-shots from here on out, I'd like to see your perspective on other characters as well. :) |