Reviews for Raisin
Guest69 chapter 1 . 6/28
Too fucking good. I don't even know where the fuck you get these ideas from but please, keep them coming. Jaune feeling sentimental over them like a good parent had me in stitches.
TheDragon2000 chapter 1 . 6/18
So we have future Blake Taurus, Blake Wukong, Blake Amitola, Blake Pine, Blake Branwen, Blake Belladonna(shadow) and the original.(so Blake Xiao Long?) Truly one of the most terrifying horror stories on this site. :D Thanks for sharing!
TheBlindSalmon chapter 1 . 2/28
This was simply glorious, even if I'm not really a fan of any romantic ships involving only one half of Renora, even if it's onesided.
Since none of the clones were paired with Yang, does that mean she gets paired with True Blake and is therefore the main in the harem? I'm assuming it does.
TooMuchTime chapter 1 . 1/2
This was a riot. Long live the Blake Empire and Fire!Taurodonna
Ruberforumfree chapter 1 . 12/17/2019
I would have prefered if Jaune would have said to Ilia to go fuck herself... like really
Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
Okay, I laughed a lot.
Ikedawg43 chapter 1 . 12/2/2019
Hate
Eramis8 chapter 1 . 11/30/2019
I mean yeah, Blake has always been the harem protagonist.

Poor Jaune, his children are already moving out and one is being rebellious.
246vili chapter 1 . 11/29/2019
Well, I would say Blake (the first and original Blake) deserved the bell for being too curious for her own good and draging poor Jaune into it.

To be honest, I was originally expecting this to somehow turn into a JauneXBlake clones Harem,because of the "Rare pairings added." part in the poll. I mean Blake clones showing their "gratitude" to Jaune for giving them life and whatnot is a rare RWBY pairing as far as I know.

But THIS was way better than that.
In the end everyone who had a thing for Blake got their happy ending... meaning, their own, matching Blake. Even Ren, Ozpin/Oscar and Qrow ended up with a Blake, just not in a romantic way, though in Ren's case it's more like Shadow Blake having a crus on him, much to Nora's ire.

Great one shot!
Keep up the good work with your other stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/28/2019
A very creative way to please all RWBY shippers. I like the idea behind the story, people should wonder about the power of boosted semblances more and I like where those explorations led you. Good story.
InspectorJacket chapter 1 . 11/26/2019
Blake harem? Pass. Hard pass.
Harem of Blakes? Now that's more like it.
InfiniteM0nkeys chapter 1 . 11/26/2019
Nah, Jaune's the oblivious harem protagonist of RWBY. He's the one who's stubbornly convinced that everyosne around him is "just being a friend" as they try ever more ridiculous strategies to woo him.
Blake knows exactly what she's doing while building her harem.
EiNyx chapter 1 . 11/26/2019
The quality of these have definitely dropped from your other work. It shows that you're rusty. This was a whole lot of nothing.
duskrider chapter 1 . 11/26/2019
I love how this Jaune is going parental in this.
Midnight49 chapter 1 . 11/25/2019
See just yesterday I had the random thought of what would happen, if Jaune powered up Blake’s Semblance. And I can excitingly say this is somehow the way I pictured it! Still love how Fire Blake is Conspiracy Theorist Blake.
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