Reviews for Proof, that you are not Soul bound |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is funny. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute little one-shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! This is absolutely amazing, you're a talented writer. I love H/Hr |
![]() ![]() That was great, I hope you write longer stories, I reaaly like your style. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sniff, this was so sweet, that yes! it's going on my favorites, list. |
![]() ![]() ![]() -raises hand in the air- um, good sir! May I have more! Oh my god I need more to this story lol great ending |
![]() ![]() Interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Funny. So you end up up replacing one Soul Bond with another, it seems. The analytical part of me says that it could be tested by seeing if the Life debt was still in force. Ah well,,, Wonder what person caught them? Still a hoot. TGM |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very Cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed your story. Good theme and it moved at a good pace. There were a few punctuation issues that could probably be resolved with a beta read. This last thing I will mention only because you express interest in strengthening your writing - there is a sentence once they are in the broom closet that threw me out of the story a bit. It’s where you mention that Harry’s strong, well-muscled chest was pressed against Hermione’s more well endowed one. This sentence came pretty far into the story and was really the first spot where you used description. The decision to use double description in this one sentence was doubly jarring because of that. It was also a really long sentence, as it went on to mention Hermione hoped Harry would’t notice her reaction, and the descriptive word choices of their respective chests just made that one spot read a wee bit soft-core romance novel. I thought the rest of it was great. I have not seen your plot before, but it made sense for the characters - of course Research Girl would read up on soul bonds and of course lonely Harry would want to believe he had one. The conversational lines sounded realistic and you did a nice job of setting the pace. Well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was just beautiful. Serves Ginny right, trying to steal Hermione's man. Loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it very amusing. Would love one more chapter where albus and everyone find out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was great, really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! |