I read it from start to the last update an I need more! You have such a talent for spinning such good storylines, Jackie!

Jeez, just when they confessed their love to each other, sodding Paraguay and Clayton Webb throw spanners in the works.

I really like this story, and hope that they can over come Webb and his plans, because I know that he’s scheming ass, and someone that I really never liked him, everything was ever as it seemed with him, but I did like the way that he tried to come up with ways to get Mac and Harm to come along on his crusades.

I don’t know how you keep so many story lines going, but you sure do a good job of it! I never did like the way they wrote the episode of Harm and Singer’s death. You’ve done a much better job. Now to see how you handle Paraguay!

Building nicely; more please when the creative muse assists you. Mike

Now update tomorrow.

Wow! Wonderful chapter in a wonderful story! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Epic!

Hope Harm saves her from that fiasco in Paraguay.

Excellent writing and I hope you keep writing it

Exciting! Mooooore!

Good to see Harm finally realising his mistakes were as a result if his own doing. Seeing Dr Riley will hopefully help Harm to heal properly & give him a future with Mac they both want

Loving this story and looking forward to the next chapter. Web needs to permanently leave Harm & Mac alone

Did you mean for dr. Riley to say "Or the semblance of it"?
And "Your want to control"?
And "Essentailly"?
Dd you mean for Harm to think "their breakup"?
I hate the sound of Mac's meeting with Clayton Webb at Langley.

The end of the chapter is screaming Paraguay. I just hope Mac don't let rope herself in that scheme.

Amazing! Wonderful chapter in a wonderful story! Can’t wait to see what happens next! Curious to see what Webb wants now.