I think the Jolly Roger should be the straw hat roger with half the skull crumbling away to show a demon or something.

Well this sucks. No way Luffy will get there in time to save Kaya. A broken Usopp is not Usopp anymore.

poor panicky Usopp

oh no its Kuro

Good chapter, I think Nojiko would look better with a Spear than a giant axe

Hi there

i think the Bisento wold be awesome for Nojiko, which is a middle ground between an axe and a spear.

For Ussop, maybe create one weapon that does everything? You see laser fire in One Piece, but the weapons actually used is old, I don't understand that part...

Imagine what damage Ussop can do if he used a sniper rifle that contains armament Haki bullets, head shot for the win!

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!

Hi there

The last part with Ussop, is this what happens when if Luffy didn't visit the island?

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!

How about vivi as a pairing with luffy?

I hope nothing happens to Usopp and Kaya. Usopp is just way to funny to have him die off. Unless you are not planning on having any comedy in the story and making it completely dark? Then let us know in advance. I prefer funny and easy going One Piece stories like the original over dark and tragic crap.

This story is probably not for me anymore. Good luck.

Oh great, having useless and unnecessary crewman.

Good chapter, glad Luffy isn't gonna hide no more. That was honestly kind of annoying throughout the whole story, also I'm thinking maybe Ussop is going to use real bullets? Because that would be awesome. Anyway thanks for the chapter.

Your not really going to make nami a sex slave are you. I get you need trama but not tape or srx slave please

Nice and interesting story

thanks for the update!