Awesome chapter

come on man update I am not a hero, nor a villain story please.

Well time to gear up bat family and black hood, you got unwanted dinner guess coming. Naruto is ready to get his hands dirty in order to protect his loved ones and innocent people in the city. Especially the children he doesn't want kids to suffer the same fate he has of losing their parents. That alone strengthens his resolve to clean up Gotham by putting scumbags down for a dirtnap. Speaking of parents i have an idea involving the mission of Arkham if your interested. After saving eachother multiple times naruto tells Deadshot about his parents and why he became blackhood and killed black mask. I think as a parent Deadshot can understand why naruto dawns the hood considering he tries to give his daughter Zoe a better life. He can also tell Killer Frost to, not because of the sex they had the night before the mission. But because she earned his respect and trust during the mission. Peace

if i renember correct, once you end s2 of YJ you will diverge from canon, but will you use s3 charecters like Brion, Violet, Forager etc. in you story; also something else, witch version of Cyborg will you use, the YJ one or a version that is already member of JL;

I thought I was going crazy

I’m pretty sure I read these before, are you rewriting the story because it’s driving me nuts.

Honestly that's what's make me worried about this story. If you cant find a way for the harem to come together then dont force it. I hate when writers force things that they try do for while but for it to come out silly or just outright stupid and terrible. Honestly I think you should should just do it one by one. Have his story arcs with them. Batgirl represents his humanity, supergirl represents his heroic and I guess supermanish abilities, and starfire represents his dark neutral side. I think this story should represent what path he wants to choose, but that choice should be a very difficult one, and should show his struggles.
For him to be with all three is just to easy, and I know you're dead set one with the harem, and everyone for some reason wants it to, but I think it really has no place to be in a story like this. It will break a sense of immersion cause of the tone, themes, and writing.
I know you have your mind set, but this is how I feel. I think the way it should is just do what you're currently doing but when it gets to the point when needs to decide what he wants set up a poll what he wants in life. At the end of the day it's your story and whatever you decide I will just keep on reading cause this story is great, but I will be critical when harem aspect starts so good luck.

This was it amazing chapter.

Awesome chapter

SO, I noticed that it's under Batman but it's Book 1. Does this mean that Book 2 will involve Superman, then Book 3 will involve Teen Titans? Since you're adding in Supergirl and Koriand'r, and it's in the Batman section, will it change to DC Comics or..?

Glad i was able to help out. Well our boy just found out the world is a much bigger place then he realized. Honestly i can't blame his reaction about the court of owls and their zombie ninja army. I reacted the same way when i first saw Batman vs Robin, Still makes me wonder what the elite upper class are capable of sometimes. While naruto and talon are similar and he's got every right to watch Gotham burn to the bedrock, naruto draws the line at innocent people. There's no honor in killing innocent people. The court of owls are nothing compared to Ras Al ghul and his league of assassins. In the back of my mind I know he's taking an interest in naruto as well. Who knows maybe his greatest warrior lady Shiva can help him improve his style when Deathstroke leaves for a job. They could develop a family bond with eachother. While he thinks of Slade like an uncle Shiva can be like an aunt. Got another way narutos black hood supporters can be more involved. Some can act as his informants letting him know when major drugs guns and other deals are going down. They can be anybody to ordinary average joes to people who work for companies. Peace

How about a Senjutsu similar to Juugo. Though the markings can be different. Ever seen Hinomaru Sumo. While not exactly a fan of Sumo it does have very good art and ideas about ones bloodlust.

a significant portion of the end of this chapter is in bold, just fyi

Dude, don't know if you got my PM message so I'll post it in the reviews.

I messaged you to tell you that your Naruto/Batman story has inspired me to make a Spawn/Batman story with some things a BIT similar to your story, like Naruto's childhood backstory and history with Barbara but not a copy of the story.

I messaged you to see if it was alright with using some ideas and to see if you wanted to help out with ideas and arcs so our stories aren't similar, even though I don't know if you read the comics to make the Court of Owls arc.

What do you say?

You still haven’t said how this is a crossover and how he not a OC. Just cause you add other characters and some lore don’t make this a crossover you just adding more OCs and info from the show. This Naruto was born in Dcu, he was not reborn, not reincarnated Or displace this Naruto and any other character you bring in is not from the Naruto world therefore it is not a crossover. Just a bunch of character in name only. Should have just made this just Batman cause I see no point in Naruto and any character you may bring in even being in this

And no I’m not talking bout his power or his personality I’m talking bout the Anime it self the anime it self has nothing to do with this So that makes it not a crossover