Awesome update :)

I can’t wait to read more!

Absolutely love it! Can’t wait to read more and see how Victoria and Harry’s relationship is affected by all of this.

Great story so far, I am really curious when Harry is going to separate, or break up with Veronica. The amount, duration, and severity of the secrets she is keep is going to appear as betrayal to Harry. And honestly, it kind of is, she's had her suspicions about Malfoy since the summer, but she didn't do anything other than silently support Harry.
I do hope that you don't glaze over the fact that Draco was casting Crucio when Harry hit him with that spell. Otherwise Veronica will be fully justified in her anger, right now she's just worried about her friend, and everyone is hyped up and emotional for various reasons.

I really like this so far. Veronica is neither an annoying damsel nor is she annoyingly perfect. I like the balance and also that she is not completely on the 'good' side, helping out Draco and such. I wonder what's gonna happen next and can't wait for your update. keep up the good work!

I kind of agree with her reaction as it was quite foolish to use the spell. But I also hope we see her reaction to Draco going to use the cruciatus on Harry. At the moment it kind of feels like she excuses everything Draco does. Also how will she feel when she has actually helped him get DE's into the castle and it ends up with Dumbledore dead. I like her and how you write her, also love her and Harry together:) Interesting to see what happens next!

Great story! Really nice developed plot. Looking forward to the next update

Shits about to go down man chapter 53*

Love it:)

I can’t wait to read more!

Nigthmare's coming.
Does she even know what Draco is doing?
Does she even want to know?
He is the poor badboy and so she has to be his friend.
I suppose she will support Draco after the Sectumsempra episode.
Will she help Bellatrix and the others to step out of the cabinet or wound Bill Wesley ?
All for the poor bad boy.
I don't like that sorry.
Manne i'll wait till you finish to continue.

I’m enjoying this take on Canon. I like the OC and the third party perspective she brings. Nicely done.

Oh he's whipped xD

I have never left a comment or review before, but I just wanted you to know how much I love this story. You are truly talented in creating realistic and very complex characters. I really really hope you continue to write this. Best of luck with everything!

MAN. I was reading and reading and before I knew it I had reached the end of the last chapter! I want more! This is a great character. I was afraid at first that she was going to be a Mary-Sue type, and maybe she has some elements of it, but after reading everything up to this point I think she is more than that. She has the potential to create more intrigue in the story, to alter some of the events of the original story. Would appreciate some more backstory and character development for her too, and more on her friendship with Ron! Thank you for your fic. I hope you post more soon.