Come on man, update soon. A lot of us are waiting since it’s so good

I'm so glad and also what type of jokes will he make?

Next chapter when please?

so when's chapter 3?

So? Chapter 3?

HOW THE HELL IS SHE STILL ALIVE! She was reincarnated as a human and lost her awoken status didn't she?

Keep it up

I like this idea a lot. Throwing Cayde into a new galaxy feels refreshing after all the OC fireteams we've seen. I hope you can find the time to bring this idea to fruition!

Come on PLEASE UPDATE!

need more

I like the idea of the story however I think cayde getting sucker punched as a veteran vanguard Hunter is really unlikely, and him getting disabled by an emp? Really? Exos are capable of walking through fallen emp mines, how the heck does mass effect technology that is a lot less advanced compared to destiny tech disable him? Exos were really advanced ai and I think it's safe to say they designed them to not be vulnerable to things like emps, and having a Petra Shepard? No. Just no. The story came off strong but then that happened it makes no sense, by that point you might as well bring over all of the cast from destiny 1 & 2 by that point, not to mention all the other things that make no sense for the sake of adding tension or something to the story such as him getting sucker punched or even hit by the throw from saren, I think cayde would have enough experience with warlocks to know that "hey big energy orb of some kind is coming to hit me I should dodge", he was able to dodge mass effect rounds from Ashley which move something close to the speed of light if not faster, he could dodge those while running away with his back turned to her yet he can't dodge a simple biotic throw at point blank range while looking at saren? I recommend attempting to finish this story but try to make things in the story make sense instead making things make no sense just for the sake of tension or the plot and once you finish it and feel that your skills at writing a story have improved enough to do a rework after the story finishes or after several other stories, that way you can improve upon it and ask yourself does this make sense, and think outside of the box, you are not limited to the story of the games, you can go against the ideas of you have to do this to get this in the story or for example say caydes super such as the lighting blade why is it it's always a balde for close range, why not make a bunch of lightning knives to throw at enemies? You do it with the regular knives things like that, I hope this doesn't come off as me being mean however I feel that you need to be aware of things like this to grow as a writer I do look forward to this and other stories and I do enjoy this story besides the nonsensical things

We are interested

Please update more and soon

Loving this story so far, it's got a lot a potential. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter
I'm curious about something, why a Trust hand cannon? It's a great hand cannon, yes, but Cayde's always been associated with his Ace

I'm loving this story so far, it has a lot of potential. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter. Hopefully this isn't a dead story
I'm curious on one thing though, why a Trust hand cannon? It's a great hand cannon, yes, but Cayde's always been associated with his Ace