Reviews for Finding Myself |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story! |
![]() ![]() I can’t get on board with this chapter. This 17 year old pregnant girl is brand new to making love and Paul introduces BDSM. Why go there? Why not just concentrate on the plot content instead of turning it into 50 Shades and making it all about bondage and kink? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story, but feel it ended too soon. For some reason I cannot pinpoint right now, I feel there is/was more to tell. I loved how Paul and Bella seemed to have a connection and began to fall for each other before the imprint. It seems Bella, and maybe even Paul learned who they were as they grew closer to each other. Thank you for writing and sharing your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow when she said is was Jake responsibility to push her I was just shaking my head. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You kicked ass on this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well this is fucken amazing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i will say that I'm disappointed that this is how the story is ending but im happy that you are focusing on your own needs. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely loved it. Sure there are similarities to other stories but you owned this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully written. Would love to see more about this...did the tribe get stronger, etc. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What about helping the Cullens with their souls? And would Bella survive? ? Just something to think about! ! Good book what is next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know this was a few months ago but I hope you’re doing ok. I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story and do hope you write a sequel. Maybe a couple years in the future to show how the pack is doing and stuff, with an epilogue that leads to that vision Bella showed Jake. You write really well and the story was engaging and I’d love to see more from you when you get time. I know how it gets with real life and stuff but don’t give up on writing completely. Something I do? I write down everything. Notebooks, computer, even an app on my cell phone. Anytime an idea or a scene hits I get it down if I’m able. Even if I don’t work on that story anytime soon, I know I have it when I eventually do get to it. Thanks for sharing your wonderful stories with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad she was able to show Jake that and ease his mind. |