Can you write more for this. I would love for cocoa to actually hit Ernesto with a shoe and her parents be there. Also her spending more time with hecktor realizing how young he was while he still kind of treats her like she 4. Maybe she can talk to him about that realization. Hecktor seems like he would be more the type to act like a child and be kinda of silly.

LOVE IT!

This was so beautiful. You did a really good job capturing Coco's character.

This is beautiful:)

This was such a sweet story!
I loved Coco and Héctor up on the roof together!
You have a cery poetic way of writing.

So sweet!

To be truthful, I expected to cry at this. Not disappointed. *dabs face with fists full of tissues*

Oh man, that would be so hard for Coco to realize- I absolutely love how you handled this! Such a sweet story, but that little undercurrent of heartache when she realizes what happened to her Papa... so wonderful! Also Coco taking down Ernesto de la Cruz is something I would looove to see but it’s probably best for all involved if they never cross paths XD

So cute! Are you going to do another one?

Aww, that was a cute story.