Reviews for The Visit
Moe Latignant chapter 1 . 6/18
Jade was the way she was, mostly because of fear and insecurity. While many things that she did can't be excused, she didn't deserve to die.
tomorrowsgillz chapter 1 . 4/25
i- this is absolutely amazing. i straight up sobbed twice
Lodylodylody chapter 1 . 4/7
Fantastic job. You really had me fooled oh, and if the story had gone the way I originally assumed it was going, I still would have given you a positive review for the fantastic writing. But with the great twist, that did not detract at all from the emotion of the story, you just took everything to another level. So thank you for not only writing a compelling story, but giving it a happy ending as well.
JadeWestOliver4 chapter 1 . 3/17/2019
I'm crying. Beautifully written
My name is Anon chapter 1 . 3/26/2018
Well this was a twist. I was extremely sad at first my heart going out to Jade, but as I continued to read and understood everything I was extremely relieved. It seems everything worked out for her in the end. Writing is very therapeutic. And now she gets to live her life happily with tori.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/19/2018
That was amazing
Lushcoltrane chapter 1 . 3/20/2018
Dark but with a hopeful finale. Initially, I was thinking Jade was locked up but then I figured out most of what happened. Well, until the twist...
HunterMoore chapter 1 . 3/20/2018
Great story, awesome work. Glad it had a happy ending.
VoltageStone chapter 1 . 3/19/2018
This one was dark and portrayed the message well.
Azkadellio chapter 1 . 3/19/2018
I'm glad the grave visit wasn't a real world moment. I'm sure I'm not the only one who wouldn't be happy at Jade dying alone.

This isn't me hating your direction, since I get your message of suicide prevention. Just hating the idea of Jade being dead because the others were too wrapped up and thinking Jade was tricking them and being out of character to do so.

Dark one, but important because of its dark nature.
alex02 chapter 1 . 3/18/2018
I loved it great writing great story.
Invader Johnny chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
This was dark and full of twists and turns for Jade and Tori, nicely done.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Elultrafiction13.mil chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
Esta buena, podrĂ­as pasarte por mi fanfic? tambien es de victorious, gracias y saludos!
Boris Yeltsin chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
Great work.