Reviews for Undone |
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simplystupified77 chapter 6 . 7/21 I loved this so much, thank you for this piece. |
Moonangel09 chapter 6 . 4/28 I don't think I've cried so much on a story in a while. It was beautiful. |
Vi-Violence chapter 6 . 4/4 Nice work. |
Jingy5 chapter 6 . 10/1/2019 great story! thanks so much for sharing this, I couldnt stop reading! |
Moon Bunny chapter 6 . 5/4/2019 I re read this story because I remembered how good it was the first time, and it's still a great piece! I enjoy Usagis feelings and the details about the crystal. it's great! Keep Writing |
Minirowan chapter 6 . 9/27/2018 This was so good! I don't know why but there aren't many identity reveal fics in this fandom. One would think fans would jump on that cliche given the nature of the show, but nope! I was really happy to find this and I loved everyone's characterization. It was nice to see everyone being so supportive of each other. Although I wonder how Mamoru got his hands on that equipment. I know he and Ami are geniuses, but I didn't think that extended to medical knowledge. I think her parents were extreme in kicking her out, no matter what they thought she was doing, but I doubt the others would have agreed to the reveal otherwise. I wish there was at least one chapter covering the whole reincarnation, soulmate/destined lovers, and future monarchy discuss. But then I think poor Kenji would go catatonic. I wonder how they would react to knowing they met their future granddaughter? Honestly, you could write a whole story from the parents perspective and I would 100% read it. But I'm just grateful for what you already wrote, thank you for the story! |
Lady Razeli chapter 6 . 9/23/2018 Nooo that can't be the end. :( This was so refreshing and explains why Usagi just doesn't bounce back like the others. I loved the conflict with her parents. And Honestly I laughed so hard when they thought she was pregnant. And even harder when Kenji was like fuck, why can't she be pregnant instead lmao. |
Ghost Man chapter 6 . 8/15/2018 All the truth in your face. Even then humans are hard to believe such things. LOL. "Cat food alright?" Okay...that made me smile. . Batman's parents , Nevermind *snickers* It's everyone's first guess huh? Shingo: 0Luna 1 , Poor Kenji. I kinda feel for the guy Wouldn't mind seeing an exapansion of this. There's some potential of growth. |
Ghost Man chapter 5 . 8/15/2018 Haruka...also best...waifu? This story...too much fun. Hotau...best future waifu cuz OMG SHE SO CUTE |
Ghost Man chapter 4 . 8/15/2018 Ami...also best waifu How did Mamoru...nevermind "How do you know how to do this?" Simple...doctor in training...and mom's a doc. *snickers* Did those two wait ALL day to use that line? 0.o Huh...go Rei. |
Ghost Man chapter 3 . 8/15/2018 o,o What is it with writers finally tackling the legit dark issues of the genre? |
Ghost Man chapter 2 . 8/15/2018 It's not fair...Rei might have a temper, but she's not insufferable. Oh. There be reasons. Huh. I guess that would be an elevation of the situation...tough. LOL! Oh wow. About time someone brought up those vending machines. Loved those things when I was in Japan. |
RogueAlly chapter 6 . 6/5/2018 Aw, I wish you’d continued to the princess reveal with them. Their eyes would bug out for sure on that one. Plus the reaction to the Serenity-and-Endymion situation would have been great. |
RogueAlly chapter 1 . 6/5/2018 I’m a little confused on when this is set. Maybe the rest of the story will help. It’s just that you mention the Dark kingdom, but then Mamoru seems to know that she’s Sailor Moon and they’re together, AND he mentions waiting another thousand years. But then Rei says that she’s the leader “for some reason.” Uh, she’s the princess. Do they not know that yet in your sorry? How does Mamoru remember them being together in the past if they haven’t figured that out yet? |
CassieRaven chapter 6 . 4/25/2018 This was a really cute story. I enjoyed reading it every step of the way. Well done. |