It's pretty good,I benged it up to this point.
The OC is a little to OP, I understand being stronger and more experience but to Devil fruit abilities are to unrealistic even for a devil fruit. Just throwing Demon in front of whatever ability is suddenly useful/ you want them to have is kinda lazy and unimaginative. It doesn't leave much room for growth and development. It seems like its zoan fruit and should follow that structure if it is, Human Form, Human-Beast Form, Beast Form and I know it is possible for Zoan users to unlock additional transformations; for instance, Marco could transform selective parts of his body, and Chopper could transform into at least seven different forms: here having some is cool due to her experience and amount of time shes had her ability, but the seemingly random adding of things like telekinesis (where theoretically half transformed demon strength with posible help or transforming arms and legs would be enough) really takes away from the story.I get it's supposed to imply how advanced she is compared to them but it takes away form the flow. Her ability to function under water when she has a devil fruit ability, event fully transformed, is to much of a cheat especially without an explanation.

I have a question about their ages. It's implied that shes born/conceived after rogers death, but shes older than Ace who was already conceived.

I really have been enjoying this and its good, these are just the things pulling out form what I'm reading. I just want you to get even better. Sorry that its long. Pleas keep going. :)

Great chapter on the strawhats red devil-albasta arc, so can you please put up the next chapter to the story now please

Alright, that's about as far as I can go. You've changed nearly nothing about this story. You've only added a character; who, can apparently do anything. Devil powers? She can heal? What? Then, to make it worse, you didn't utilize her at all. She's literally just in the background.

This isn't horribly written, but absolutely nothing interesting has happened. It's literally Canon 1.

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A bumper chapter, and nicely written with different POV, I enjoyed it!

I can't to see what Dakota will say when Robin is in the picture.

Anyway, keep up the great writing!

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I wonder what more of an impact Dakotoa will have later on?

I like your writing, change the POV now and then, like you doing, I like to see the how the crew themselves think of her.

Anyway, keep up the great writing!

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Your writing is improving and the length is longer, nice to see!

Keep up the great writing!

Nice chapter

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Great chapter as usual.

Does January 19th mean only next year you updating?...

Anyway, keep up the great writing!

This update made my birthday 10 times better

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I can't wait to see the romance happening, maybe they must apr more, as sword practitioners.

Keep up the great writing!

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I really enjoy your OC, and here interaction between the her and the starwhats, but why don't she teach them Haki or something?

Anyway, keep up the great writing!

I can’t wait to see her meet Robin!

Ok, I'm into it. Let's see where this goes.

I really feel bad about having to wait so long for the next chapter.
Well, without more to say, great story! I hope to read the next fanfic soon!

Very good fanfic! Each chapter I like more