Could you PLEASE come back and add line breaks so I can actually fking read this story properly? Thanks

Aw is this fanfic Finished? If not i hope there'll be an update soon! Thanks author

I love granny zhang Cri

huh... I'm kinda confused.
Is it Clint's POV? Or Someone else?
I don't know anymore... this is confusing, yet so addicting, it's great if you like mystery! Sorta...

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YASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! MERRY CHRISTMAS!
PLEASE KEEP WRITTINNGGGGGG! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR WRITING!

fag

This was a fantastic read well done

So is this an evil Percy story?

Again, I’ve loved the chapter, and I’ve noticed that you have toned down on the eyes, which is a plus. Sorry I don’t have a lot for you this time around, but nothing’s coming to mind (and don’t take that in a bad wayhopefully I’ll have more next chapter.

Mad one

Is the mysterious person Kronos?

Cough 'hopefully' by January cough.

Unlikely.

ALTHOUGHHHH! I think dat person at the end is...Meg from Trials of Apollo.
Percy has met them before BUT, you said 'Perseus' not Percy, so I'm assuming I am wrong. But the 'Follow your roots' I remember the Prophecy from Trials of Apollo have a line that sound something like that so...
Please notice me.
'~'

Also personally, I think that you should just not do a pairing for Percy. I don’t have anything against slash or those who like slash, but it’s just not for me, and if you don’t think you’re capable of doing a straight pairing since you can’t write women, then I would just prefer no pairing. I’d like to think that I would still read this story even if it ends up being slash, but I can’t promise anything. Also, literally my only nitpick for this story is how often you describe people’s eyes. It’s gotten rather repetitive and honestly a tad annoying, but aside from that, which itself really isn’t anything major, I’ve absolutely loved your writing style, and I can’t wait for the next update.

I’m... confused. Loki’s trip to Midgard under the guise of a 10 year old child—he said that that was during his childhood. He is thousands of years old, and thus his childhood would have been thousands of years ago as well. Yet, every sign seems to point to the child that Loki met being Percy, which just doesn’t make sense. The only logical solution is that this Loki isn’t thousands of years old as he is in the MCU, and that does seem to be the case considering that Loki said that he started his invasion of Earth when he gave up on ever finding that child again, which means that it couldn’t have been thousands of years ago as one of Loki’s childhood memories should have been. I’m honestly just a little confused.