Dide your writings so great, the stories immersive and the characters actually have good personalities to match the situations their in, hope to see you keep writing in the future.

come on the people deserve to know what is going to happen next

cant wait for more im sure it will be amazing

an amazing story by an amazing writer

...did he just evolve?

Thumbs up dude, the first Pokemon fanfiction I've read and the best so far

Phil's fucked, literally. Keep it up. And you are welcome for the cover.

Great update. Hope that another one can come out soon. Until then, best of luck in all your writing endeavors

I really liked reading this and I would enjoy it even with out the lemons

This story is amazing so far. Hope you can update soon. Until then, best of luck in all your writing endeavors

Nice chapter, I like it.

I’m too lazy to paraphrase something this big, so [insert 1st paragraph here]
Wow. A flareon and a leafeon? How dynamic. Not sarcasm, by the way.
[Prof. Phil.]
I can see it now… -harp plays as scene washes away-
“Hello, person. My name is Phil—“
“THE DOCTOR?!”
“Wh-what the hell? No! I’m a professor.”
[Many other scientists do it for money or whatever but that’s why they all fail.]
Ouch. Roasted. Also, no. Logically, money should motivate them. But I guess this guy has some inhuman attachment to creating machines that help animals.
[Smiling at my eevolutions cries,]
That sentence could be taken in a very, very sexual way.
What a great start to a… great fanfiction! In all honesty, there’s a few spelling errors here and there, but it’s a good story. Er—chapter.

Tbh I'd scream bloody murder lmao, and I'd also type "I've only mated with 1 in my pack, and this is the second time I've been raped." Lmao
Good story tho

Yes

Roses are red, I'm not in yemen...
This line made me laugh out loud. Hilarious stuff, and another great chapter! Can't wait for next week! :D