Reviews for Out of My Reach
p chapter 13 . 9/6
this is the 4th time i’m reading this fic and i still cant get over how horrible a friend alice is... to be honest i wish she was written so that lily and her dont stay friends. and i just have to mention that i love the relationship between scorpius and lily as they are the only ones who know and understand the other
Susy M chapter 1 . 8/18
I love your story so much, it's one of the best I've read. I'm also writing a Scorily fanfiction, it's called Nénuphar and will follow Lily throughout her school years, there's mystery and romance.
miaoca304 chapter 1 . 8/15
Ok, this is my second comment bwhahahah
I just got to say I loved the story but...
And first, everyone is entitled to their own opinion and what they want to do with their life.
Lets continue with the but...
But don’t you think its a little tiny tinsy bit unrealistic for a 15 year old to be short of begging for her boyfriend or friends with benefits for sex? I mean don’t get me wrong, it was uhm painted as something as an act of love? Readiness? I dont know. But you gotta admit Lily was a little desperate to get laid by scorpius. At 15 no less! And from then on up til she’s sixteen she has a very active sex life. A bit unrealistic for me and Now, I try to picture them as people in college. Everyone is entitled to their opinion and what they want to do with their body and life but as a 16 yr old girl, I’m not lusting after sex just yet
miaoca304 chapter 1 . 6/23
Im the one person, i think, who watches too many movies and tv shows, and reads too many books to get and see all the quotes and things in this and be reminded of specific happenings in different fictional things. I absolutely adored the story and loved everything. I just have the problem of how you handled Albus Severus, I get the interpretation of him here but from what I read in the epilogue, i sort of pictured him differently. Definitely not like that hahahahaah, I got vibes of shyness, insecurities and generally timidness from him. Thatsss alll Thankyouuu for the wonderful story though i was a bit unsatisfied with the portrayal of Albus, I think his and James Sirius was reversed here ahahahah
Rissyroo65 chapter 40 . 6/2
That was literally the best thing ever. I’m like crying that was amazing and I just want more. Like you’re so amazing and an absolute queen. Like I would read every story about this family you’d write. Also I just really want a big family tree with EVERYONE because I just think it’d be amazing. I’m so sad it’s over but thank you for actually completing this.
DayDreamer2796 chapter 40 . 2/16
This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read and I've read over 2000 of them. You made us fall in love with your OCs just as much as the main characters and that takes some really skilled writing. For the longest time, I was a huge fan of Slytherin's Potter by Animeaddict56. Now, I can add another favorite up there. Great job and I hope to read more stories about your OCs like Cassie, Damen, and definitely more of Anton!
Julie chapter 40 . 12/7/2019
Did you ever write Cassiopeia and Maxons story? If so please post the link this story page. Can’t wait!
Thestral394 chapter 30 . 10/13/2019
The more I read this the more I love it I'm just love Hugo and Anton their characters are absolutely amazing I don't know which is funnier and my respect for Louis has more then doubled for what he did for Dominique and then respected her wishes to say nothing I don't know how he didn't kill the guy on the spot because that's what I would have done if I got hold of the bastered that did that to my sister. So thank you again for the amazing story
Thestral394 chapter 20 . 10/11/2019
So far I'm loving this it's fast becoming one of my favorite fics and I just have to say I love the way you portray Hugo when ever he's part of a secan I find my self laughing and he definitely has a good hart from what he's done for Lilly this chapter just confirms it. Thank you for the amazing fic
atal23 chapter 40 . 5/29/2019
I thoroughly enjoyed this. Seeing Scorpius and Lilly's relationship develope the way it did was wonderful. everything was amazing, the extent that Astoria would to ensure her children was frightening but also heart warming. Seeing that different family dynamics and tge different relationships vetween all the characters was great. I loved Anton, he was great. Cassie was another on of my favorites. You did an amazing job. I spent the last 4 hours reading this instead of studying for my test. Hope fully my mark isnt too terrible.
Ouba chapter 40 . 5/23/2019
I looooooove your story so much I've read it 3 times now and it still hits me in the feels everytime. It would be amazing if you wrote Cassie and Maxon's story even in just a OS
Tenente de Artemis chapter 4 . 4/23/2019
Snap your fingers at me to see what I would do to them your arrogant little pig
ladyprinc3ss chapter 40 . 4/16/2019
Absolutely amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I can't wait to read about Astraea and Rowen. There's a lot of Malfoy (and Potter and Greengrass) men to flip out over that one.
NavinaMikaelson chapter 1 . 1/20/2019
One of the most amazing stories I have ever read. So detailed and interesting. I liked that while it was a Scorily story you incorporated other character's perspective and lives. I hope to read more from you in the future.
Neriman chapter 40 . 1/16/2019
One of the best stories ever written
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