Hey this fanfic is also very good this story is great hope you update this too love ya. also I ship moon and player.

Awesome chapter! The law enforcement question is one I've been asking since Platinum. The few times a cop has been in the games, he's made you, a kid, do all the work. And that's why I hate Looker. Sorry, random rant only vaguely related to your story over. I can't wait to see your next chapter!

Okay what is the ship name for sun and Moon? Cause this author has gotten me very curious of this ship.

The dialogue with the mom is about what I'd expect from some of them in this universe.

Awesome chapter! I especially liked the swimmer trainer's cameo with that awkward line "If I'm wearing a bikini, where do I keep my Poke Balls? Tee hee, woman's secret!" especially with the Player's cluelessness! Also, the friendship between Player, Hau, and Moon is sweet and it looks like Player is getting used to some of the weirdness!

I can see it now. That Pichu is going to become a master architect. Grass starter is best starter.

LOL, love this chapter! But, Player, you're going to regret not battling the teacher and missing out on those Great Balls when it's time to capture stronger Pokemon!

*reads last sentence* awww they're so cute. I've gotta find a pic like that.

This chapter is so awesome! It reminds me of when I as Moon did the trainer school, but ten times more awesome. Can Player get a Magnemite? They're actually way better than Pikachu when it comes to battling in my personal opinion with how much higher their defense is.

I absolutely love this fic and The Player! Can you give him a Growlithe as one of his Pokemon?

AAAAAAANNNNNNNNDDDDDD the fourth wall has officially been thrown out the window, off a cliff and into a car compactor. I think I spotted a TF2 reference in there. I love how Lillie is hopelessly confused and how determined player is to get out of being the protagonist.

Player and pikpiek: *arguing*

Moon and litten: *barely keeping from laughing their asses off*.

Popplio:*already sick of their shit*

It's Player!

So is this basically a humorous retelling of the newest Pokemon games? If so, count me in!

Dis gonna be gud.