If you're only going to wear partial plate armor and carry a shield the pauldron would go on the arm that carries the sword John's right handed so it would go on his right arm

would have been funnier if Jaune said HEY BUDDY! and ran

THATS BURNIES JOKE

YES! VENGEANCE! Kick Cardin's ass, show that racist asshole what for!
Who knows, perhaps the blonde brawler isn't the only girl who will take an interest in Jaune after this?
I know a certain bunny girl and fashion designer who might like to thank Jaune for beating up a racist.

Damn, who knew the prim, proper Weiss could be so dirty minded...
Lovely! Continue with the story!

You know, we're still waiting on that epilogue...

I appreciate s light-hearted story :)

I think you end some scenes too fast though. Like detention with Ozpin. See if you can find a way to convey that time passes.

Good first chapter. I'll keep reading!

Shut up nurse!

This was a nice story, i really enjoyed it.

keep up the good work :)

im kinda sad it ends here but it was a lovely read and good work. appeciate the post.

Great story. Looking forward to the epilogue. Keep it up. Laters.

excited for more from you Loved it Maybe a jaune x yang x neo? XD

The story was amazing. I'm just waiting for the hilarity to ensue when Tai is trying to threaten Jaune and he's like, immune to it because as much as men are terrifying, the woman are even more so

for some reason there was a glitch for me after was uploaded last chapter so i never read it but i did now and it was great to think with all that training he basically held off a large chunk of bandit partially saving his home town and even in a fucked up state held ok against raven until the triple teaming and damn those wrestling moves

and im hundred percent with you qrow was ruby dad but because summer being who she was cared for yang becoming her mom before and after ruby was born with tai was in a depression after raven left him so qrow was doing huntsmen work to support them but being gone all the time tai became dad and qrow became uncle a reason he drinks and then it was to late and when summer died he lost the love of his life he became drunken uncle qrow but still caring about his kid though he couldnt be with her because what i assume not wanting to take what little family she has and his bad luck so he trained her in his style though only scythe and not sword (maybe she had no time to learn it only having a couple year before moving to beacon) and she chose sniper and not what i think is shotgun which is why yang and ruby look so different and ruby look like summer and qrow and yang look like tai and raven cousins not half sister but to bad we will never know the truth because monty died and rt took over the story and changed it to whatever it is now