Reviews for Fifty Shades Paralleled
GREY CHIC chapter 4 . 6/26
I can imagine sparks flying when Ana;s friend joins them for lunch
GREY CHIC chapter 3 . 6/23
I hope Christian will understand why Ana had to leave in a hurry but I am sure they will get together
GREY CHIC chapter 2 . 6/23
Wow this was a very hot and heavy that Ana and Christian are getting to know each other and I hope they find that they love each other
GREY CHIC chapter 1 . 6/23
This is a very interesting chapter and different showing us how Ana and Christian met and tings became very hot and now we wait to see how they get along with each other
GREY CHIC chapter 20 . 3/14
This is a very scary chapter and I hope somebody can help Ana realize that Cason had raped her many times and that was sad if she thinks it is okay to be raped.
grey chic chapter 19 . 3/13
I THINK THIS IS WHERE CHRISTIAN LOSES aANA BECAUSE SHE DOES NOT THINK THAT CASON RAPED HER. GOOD BYE ANA
GREY CHIC chapter 18 . 3/13
I sure hope that Ana can come forth and tells Christian so they can compare their bad spots in their lives also I hope Ana does can realize it is for her protection
GREY CHIC chapter 16 . 3/6
I FEEL AS if I could change the story and make Ana and Christian live a life without a number of people wanting to hurt both of them but instead jealousy makes people want to hurt others who do not want to work for a living Also there are some people who just do not like others Ana and Christian should be together
starglen chapter 20 . 3/6
I was really happy to see an update for your story and enjoyed it very much. Your story is so unusual since the boot is on the other foot here and it's poor Ana who is being abused.

I can't wait to see how Kate reacts and Christian doesn't have to back off. I hope you can post again soon but I know how real life can get in the way of writing. I will wait almost patiently for your next chapter.
GREY CHIC chapter 15 . 3/4
Now I wonder how Kate will react to Christian and visa versa time will tell and I was hoping Ana would tell Christian what had happened to Ana by Cason Please Ans he told you about his younger years and now Ana shpuld do the same
GREY CHIC chapter 14 . 3/4
Well this chapter seems to be better than the last and now Ana knows about Christians poor teen years and I am hoping Ana confides in Christian about her so called protector ,what a laugh .Please Ana stay away from Cason
Guest chapter 20 . 3/2
So awesome to see an update! I really love this story and hope to read more:)
GREY CHIC chapter 13 . 3/2
I SURE HOPE THAT CHRISTIAN DOES NOT PUSH ANA AWAY BY TRYING TO PRY INTO HER LIFE. I HOPE YOU CAN HELP CHRISTIAN SETTLE DOWN AND REALIZE THAT ANA COMES FROM A DIFFERENT WORLD. THEY LOVE EACH OTHER AND I HOPE THEIR LOVE IS STRONG ENOUGH TO BE TOGETHER
GREY CHIC chapter 12 . 3/1
Well Jack Hyde thinks he has made it bad for Ana and Christian but I imagine he will soon feel the wrath of Christian ,as he also has to deal with Cason as well as Hyde. The next chapter is going to sjow the power of money
GREY CHIC chapter 11 . 3/1
WOW NOT ONLY WILL CASON BE IN TROUBLE BUT ALSO THE PICTURES OF ANA ARE ENOUGH TO HAVE HIM ARRESTED FOR CHHILD ABUSE AND BY NOW CHRISTIAN IS READY TO DO HARM TO CASON AS WELL AS JACK HYDE AND BECAUSE THEY ARE HURTING ANA CHRISTIAN WILL BE HOP UNDER THE COLLAR. HURRY CHRISTIAN BECAUSE ANA IS SICK AND CASON HURT HER THIS MORNING
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