Are you going to update this

Are you going to update this

Are you going to update this

This is rip off of another story Ive read before. not exactly the same but alot of the details are. FOR SHAME

Sigue

OK, or I'm very confused or the principle makes no sense ... Naruto is locked in his house with a broken arm, getting caught with a serious bleeding.
Ok, I buy it for you.
but ... does snow fall on it? Is it piled on a tree? Didn't he get trapped inside his house? Where the fuck the snow and the tree come out if it's inside your house !? the scene would make sense if I had waited winged from the door of the house waiting desperately or somewhere in the house itself, and if the house had no heating the freezing would have been plausible, but you have put an outdoor scene when it is assumed that It's inside the house!

Uhhh why give them a chance to see him again?
I'm confused.

Jeeze, you make Naruto's look any edgier and he will be standing on a rooftop with a Katana on his back. What motivation does Naruto have to be doing any of the shit he has done?

Nice,but i hope you can make naruto reincarnate into one of the less used pillars,like the agares who have the ability to manipulate time so you could make naruto's technics simliar to hit's from dragon ball or the belial pillar and have him turn wothless into something like meliodas full counter.

if it is a update THEN FUCKING WRITE UPDATE AND NOT CHAPTER 6

of course and can you do a chapter on one of your dbz/Naruto crossover?

I think you should keep the original up, one thing I am disappointed on with other writers is that they take down their 'original' after making a notice of the rewrite. I think you should put it up for adoption but at the same time keep the files for the story since I've seen many writers adopt a story but never end up actually following through with writing anything for it.

I say rewrite, but keep this version up for others to possibly create their own version of it anyways keep up the great work!

take it down

You should keep it up. I am a big proponent of keeping up original stories that are going to be rewritten. At least until the rewrite has reached the same point as when the original was discontinued. At that point it’s up to the author.